Oh yes, the feeling of hot molton lava flowing through your veins, would indeed make you feel like screeming, thats a nasty weapon Tchak’ta has there, I do wonder why he didn't use it earlier in the battle tho? limited range? Pi is a mystery, except for some obvious computing talent, she seems to ex...

Good chapter Crunn, looks like Illandas has a lot of work ahead, and a huge fleet to build up. Considering how badly things went and how many different races lost so much in the battle, I'd think some super weapons will be needed rather than just more ships or as well as more ships.

A very interesting encounter, shame the soap got cut off like that tho . I have to say that Pi is so naive its hard to believe she ever got herself off the planet she was hatched/born on. Still its a good job dumb luck seems, in this case at least, to enjoy dumb company

This guy just doesn't give up does he now what did he use on Tor this time.

I too think your tying this in very nicely with the games story line, seems likely to fill in some gaps that that story left out, which is very good, it sets the time frame very well for when things are happening in your story too. I do hope your story won't be too driven by that one tho, not that t...

Nicely described action between Tor,Ghaan and ThaStornla, it was very easy to picture what was going on. Ghaan may well be very ruthless, but he is still very cool, i'm sure i'd have been a lot less composed if something like ThaStornla had grabbed me like that in the dark, I guess it comes from bei...

A tense situation getting even more so. While Tor gropes around in the dark, ThaStorna has both technical aids and added senses to help him along, even Ghaan appears to have some sort of extra sense. I'm thinking he may well give ThaStornla quite a bit more of a fight than one would realy expect, po...

Moving on very nicely Merc, I , like others here can hardly wait to see how this chase ends.

Cool read, Ghaans ruthlessness comes over very well, seems so happy in his work too. Nice that ThaStorla is now, fairly, close by. Now tha Tor is injured and probably going to be slowed down by it, it will be handy if ThaStorla does, if he can, stay close. I just hope Ghaan lives long enough to 'fac...

Weird chat that,very weird and funny, particularly the end.

Great read, nice characterisations and atmosphere building, I realy want one of those morphing globes, where can I buy one? :wink: Nice tense cliffhanger ending, I will be looking forward to more of this. Cheers all who who are getting this done for us, especialy Helge, its great to finally get this...

Very good read again Merc, part two seems to have Ghaan knowing exactly what Tors moves are going to be, even with Sweety trying to second guess the situation, or maybe its that Ghaan is a precog . Well that is assuming that it is Ghaan using the jammer on that side of the station!

Just got caught up on the last chapter plus this section and it makes for some very good reading. Trapped on an isolated station, with all his allies either implicated as accomplices or just locked out of the trap, it looks like there will be some very tense moments coming up soon for Tor. I am left...

Tchak'ta gets more interesting with this section of the story. I too had forgot all about Ryhan, looks like he'll soon be in trouble with the navy tho. Will he be getting a uniform, or does he now have some sort of civilian attachment to the navy? You have a nice detailed explanation for the amount ...

"Good, I like quiet." But not for too long eh?

Some nice atmosphere building, life goes on much the same as allways, but can it last, I think not, either the Xenon or the aliens will likely upset the peace again fairly soon.

A nasty weapon Tchak’ta is carrying there. Nice to get a bit more background info on him too. I have noticed in quite a few stories, this one too, that a lot of Taladi characters are male, but in the background info on the X games it states that all Taladi pilots or maybe thats Taladis in space are ...

Interesting stuff, Ghaan seems happy that his plan is on schedule .

So Pierson is reverting to type :) Olrasin has to be feeling lonely, cut off from everything he knows, (I wish I could get a triplex scanner on my pegasus tho and a cloaking device too). I'm guessing/hoping he will soon find something of intrest, and it looks like the larger nebula will be the place...

Nice capture, if I was Lan tho, i'd have soon been transfering myself over to the Bayamon, it at least armed. Seeing Pi's battle for survival from Lans ship was interesting, now all they have to do is reach a safe haven, I doubt the pirates here will soon forget these two, it has been an expensive d...

Added the next bit. thought i should round off Pi's entrance into the story and get a move on with expanding Lans also the Teladi agent, before i forget about him. :roll: I did think that Pi with ARINOX, would have tried to capture that Orinoco, but I guess still being alive and functional will suf...