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- Wed, 29. Jun 05, 20:21
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: Oh F***
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1079
Oh F***
I'd actually completely forgotten about my story! How the hell did I do that!?! Damn I really have some catching up to do!
- Sat, 16. Apr 05, 01:21
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 4
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2620
- Fri, 15. Apr 05, 00:49
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 4
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2620
Thanks for the feedback Steve. I do need to work on what I'm doing as I've been pre-occupied with other things recently. I think I especially need to look out for redundancy and 'telling' too much. Oh and I will probably post more frequently than said above as my laptop is now internet enabled so I ...
- Fri, 15. Apr 05, 00:43
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: Rogues Return: Prologue
- Replies: 29
- Views: 4366
Oh yeah, I was supposed to post feedback.... It was an extremely good read. Very well written and a pretty intruiging start to the story. At one point I felt the story jumped a little, when The Fixer left his ship to board the other, that seemed to happen very quickly. However I was quite tired at t...
- Thu, 14. Apr 05, 19:22
- Forum: Off Topic English
- Topic: Sci-Fi Books
- Replies: 44
- Views: 2621
- Wed, 13. Apr 05, 20:52
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 4
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2620
- Mon, 4. Apr 05, 21:59
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 4
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2620
- Mon, 4. Apr 05, 00:34
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 4
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2620
The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 4
Sorry for the delay, it may stay drawn out like this until summer because of exams but after that I'm going to write and post like crazy! I have a lot of catching up to do. Anyway ENJOY!!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I awoke next morning fee...
- Fri, 1. Apr 05, 22:22
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: Help!!!
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2162
- Wed, 30. Mar 05, 21:37
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: Rogues Return: Prologue
- Replies: 29
- Views: 4366
- Sun, 27. Mar 05, 22:41
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: Help!!!
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2162
Help!!!
Right I've not written much for ages 'cos of exams and things like that and I know I have to continue the story but since I haven't done it for so long I'm finding myself not bothering.
Quick somebody give me encouragement and/or a motivational talk...ANYTHING!!!
Quick somebody give me encouragement and/or a motivational talk...ANYTHING!!!
- Wed, 16. Feb 05, 23:57
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The deep Void; Chapter 4 - Part 3
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1608
The deep Void; Chapter 4 - Part 3
Later the three of us were sat round a small table eating. Crates served as chairs and the plates and glasses were chipped. There wasn’t much food and all there was to drink was water. There had always been two distinct classes on Solsar, the rich and the poor. Mike and I had always been the latter,...
- Mon, 14. Feb 05, 00:22
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: Apologies
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1089
Apologies
Just want to say sorry for not posting much of my story for a while, I'm in GSCE year one now and there are lot of things getting in the way like work and sports and various other things. Anyway I'm on half term right now so i hope to get 2 parts on the site this week and I'll try to start posting a...
- Sun, 23. Jan 05, 20:58
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 2
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2251
- Thu, 20. Jan 05, 23:38
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: [X² Music Video] Fleetwar
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2038
- Thu, 20. Jan 05, 23:20
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: List of fanfict/vid your first & last stop! (06/01/07)
- Replies: 87
- Views: 67220
- Sun, 16. Jan 05, 13:28
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: Assassins Curse Chapter 7
- Replies: 18
- Views: 3270
Sorry I'm taking so long giving feedback, things kept coming up! Anyway the matter at hand! Well I quite liked it, there were a couple of incidents at the start and end where I got confused aas to who was which characcter (if that makes sense) but apart from that it all seemed pretty solid. I especi...
- Sun, 9. Jan 05, 00:18
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 2
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2251
- Sun, 2. Jan 05, 18:02
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 2
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2251
- Mon, 27. Dec 04, 15:26
- Forum: Creative Universe
- Topic: The Deep Void - Chapter 4 - Part 2
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2251