I'd actually completely forgotten about my story! How the hell did I do that!?! Damn I really have some catching up to do!

Yes, now that you mention it I think that whole bar scene needs completely re-doing! It was all a bit too easy

Thanks for the feedback Steve. I do need to work on what I'm doing as I've been pre-occupied with other things recently. I think I especially need to look out for redundancy and 'telling' too much. Oh and I will probably post more frequently than said above as my laptop is now internet enabled so I ...

Oh yeah, I was supposed to post feedback.... It was an extremely good read. Very well written and a pretty intruiging start to the story. At one point I felt the story jumped a little, when The Fixer left his ship to board the other, that seemed to happen very quickly. However I was quite tired at t...

THE GAP series by Stephen Donaldson (6 books in all)

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Yeah, sorry about the wait. Come summer I'l post a lot more. Glad you liked it!

Sorry for the delay, it may stay drawn out like this until summer because of exams but after that I'm going to write and post like crazy! I have a lot of catching up to do. Anyway ENJOY!!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I awoke next morning fee...

Ok next part on Sunday (can't do tomorrow as I'm going out) I'll sit down an force myself to wite at least enough for two parts.

I'll print this off to read tonight and give you some feedback tomorrow.
Just wanted to say it's good to see you writing again (I should get back to mine) and especially continuing on the Rogue series. Good luck!

Right I've not written much for ages 'cos of exams and things like that and I know I have to continue the story but since I haven't done it for so long I'm finding myself not bothering.
Quick somebody give me encouragement and/or a motivational talk...ANYTHING!!!

Later the three of us were sat round a small table eating. Crates served as chairs and the plates and glasses were chipped. There wasn’t much food and all there was to drink was water. There had always been two distinct classes on Solsar, the rich and the poor. Mike and I had always been the latter,...

Just want to say sorry for not posting much of my story for a while, I'm in GSCE year one now and there are lot of things getting in the way like work and sports and various other things. Anyway I'm on half term right now so i hope to get 2 parts on the site this week and I'll try to start posting a...

Yay, I'm still on form!

What should I use to run it cos Quicktime and media player don't work !?

I must say I'm very impressed, I would never have the patience for this!

Sorry I'm taking so long giving feedback, things kept coming up! Anyway the matter at hand! Well I quite liked it, there were a couple of incidents at the start and end where I got confused aas to who was which characcter (if that makes sense) but apart from that it all seemed pretty solid. I especi...

You all seem a bit quiet...and where's Steve?
Anyway I'll read yours tonigh C_P and post feedback tomorrow!

Anybody else got any coments and/or feedback? It's all apreciated!

Things get a little more heated later on...