Rogues Resurgence Chapter 16: Whispers of Betrayal completed

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Gandalf The White
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Post by Gandalf The White » Fri, 10. Jan 03, 12:01

Then, another bump to top!
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Post by SteveMill » Fri, 10. Jan 03, 12:20

The Doctor wrote:Then, another bump to top!

Thanks Daz

You should enjoy the next bit, to reward your vigilance I'm bringing the Commodore and the Intimidator back into the story now.
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Post by Gandalf The White » Fri, 10. Jan 03, 14:34

Wayhay! Will Max capture it? He has always wanted his own cap ship!!!
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Post by Gandalf The White » Sat, 11. Jan 03, 00:25

Bump. Getting a little to far dowwn for my liking.
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Post by SteveMill » Mon, 20. Jan 03, 16:39

Chapter completed below the *********************

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Post by Al » Mon, 20. Jan 03, 17:33

Good stuff, cant wait for more.

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Post by Moss » Mon, 20. Jan 03, 18:29

This story has so many twists and turns! one can never tell what will happen next, I do wonder tho how Max will handle it all when it starts unraveling, another fine read Steve, keep it coming.
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Post by Gandalf The White » Mon, 20. Jan 03, 19:17

Got to be that girl that Max likes. How else could Skull keep an eye on him? Must be.

Anyway, good one Steve.
some who deserve life receive death. Others who deserve death receive life. Can you give it to them? Don't be eager to deal out death in judgement, for not even the wise can see all ends.
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Post by KiwiNZ » Mon, 20. Jan 03, 21:26

Cool read, Steve. VERY intriguing. As it has been said before, very unpredictable.

I agree with daz, nobody is as close as the girl, unless Skull has managed to tap into Zee. Another leak, however, could be Jackson.

Did we come across Jaines before?

Intimadator? is this a typo or what does it mean?
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Post by Moss » Tue, 21. Jan 03, 00:13

My vote would be either Jackson (never quite trusted him) or Corins girlfriend that has Max under observation for Skull, the new girl is too obvious and Zee is unreachable in my opinion!

edit, of course I generaly get these things completely wrong so no bets here :roll:
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Post by Adamskini » Tue, 21. Jan 03, 00:29

WACK ATTACK! :)
Aug 2000 -> March 2001 - Old Skool Egosoft Forum
March 2001 -> Nov 2002 - THQ forum
Nov 2002 -> now - Current, prettier Egosoft Forum

[anybody remember The Enforcers?!]
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Post by KiwiNZ » Tue, 21. Jan 03, 04:42

Moss wrote:My vote would be either Jackson (never quite trusted him) or Corins girlfriend that has Max under observation for Skull, the new girl is too obvious and Zee is unreachable in my opinion!

edit, of course I generaly get these things completely wrong so no bets here :roll:
the new girl is very obvious, that is true but just imagine the implications and possibilities! Max checks her, finds out and plays with Skull rather than she does with him. That would sort of even the score again. Currently Skull has all the jokers up her sleeve.
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Post by Moss » Tue, 21. Jan 03, 05:29

KiwiNZ wrote:
Moss wrote:My vote would be either Jackson (never quite trusted him) or Corins girlfriend that has Max under observation for Skull, the new girl is too obvious and Zee is unreachable in my opinion!

edit, of course I generaly get these things completely wrong so no bets here :roll:
the new girl is very obvious, that is true but just imagine the implications and possibilities! Max checks her, finds out and plays with Skull rather than she does with him. That would sort of even the score again. Currently Skull has all the jokers up her sleeve.
You may well be right KiwiNZ, but the way the statment was made implied to me that Max has been under obsevation for some time, (wish I could remember her name) but the new girl has had very little contact with Max as yet, so I think not.
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Post by Mercenary » Tue, 21. Jan 03, 08:35

Excellent read again.

Plenty going on to keep people guessing.. :roll: :D
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Post by SteveMill » Tue, 21. Jan 03, 10:20

KiwiNZ wrote:Cool read, Steve. VERY intriguing. As it has been said before, very unpredictable.

I agree with daz, nobody is as close as the girl, unless Skull has managed to tap into Zee. Another leak, however, could be Jackson.

Did we come across Jaines before?

Intimadator? is this a typo or what does it mean?
Typo - Intimidator. for some reason the spell checker accepted it.

Jaines was mentioned, briefly in the beginning as the founder of the Skull Clan but i've done a bit of re-writing of earlier chapters to make more of it.
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Post by KiwiNZ » Tue, 21. Jan 03, 12:13

SteveMill wrote: Jaines was mentioned, briefly in the beginning as the founder of the Skull Clan but i've done a bit of re-writing of earlier chapters to make more of it.
yup, I guess I have to re-read earlier chapters anyway because it becomes more and more intriguing and one has to start backtracking or has no chance of speculating :lol:
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Post by Oldman » Tue, 21. Jan 03, 19:35

A good read again :)

Oldman :)
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