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Moss
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Post by Moss » Mon, 7. Apr 03, 03:26

Yea cool, now Tor has to please Caran or Creed! (i'd take Creeds offer! he's much nicer and safer when he likes you :roll:) I hope Creed suplies some good fighters for him tho, with the Bloodhearts and Khaak about, he'll need some i'm guessing (shame he lost that super Piranha eh? very careless :D ).
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SteveMill
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Post by SteveMill » Mon, 7. Apr 03, 07:42

Welcome back Merc, good read.
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Al
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Post by Al » Mon, 7. Apr 03, 10:25

Good read merc. sounds like there is going to be interesting times ahead for young Tor :)

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Mercenary
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Post by Mercenary » Mon, 7. Apr 03, 10:46

Cheers all...
KiwiNZ wrote:
I think I found a typo

"This was the pirate leader was used the name Bloodheart"

edited...
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Gandalf The White
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Post by Gandalf The White » Mon, 7. Apr 03, 11:55

Good Read again Merc, look forward to more.
some who deserve life receive death. Others who deserve death receive life. Can you give it to them? Don't be eager to deal out death in judgement, for not even the wise can see all ends.
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KiwiNZ
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Post by KiwiNZ » Tue, 8. Apr 03, 22:51

bump
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DareDevil
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"Premiu la caricatura"

Post by DareDevil » Tue, 8. Apr 03, 23:35

Before :)
and
After :evil:
Reading that book of yours
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Mercenary
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Re: "Premiu la caricatura"

Post by Mercenary » Wed, 9. Apr 03, 14:02

cristi16 wrote:Before :)
and
After :evil:
Reading that book of yours
I see this was your first post.. Welcome to the forum!

Was that the complete first Traders Tale or just this 1st chapter of TT2???

Merc.
8)
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Mercenary
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Post by Mercenary » Thu, 10. Apr 03, 21:08

Last section of the first chapter completed under the +++++

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KiwiNZ
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Post by KiwiNZ » Fri, 11. Apr 03, 01:15

Very nice finish, Merc.

Didn't they say a cheap factory? A Lasertower fab is useful as in protection but it is expensive :D How about a Crystal Fab. They make a good profit :roll: But I can see Tor's point, jumping into a volcano without preparation is not to everybody's liking :D

I found one typo, well, missing word

"you’re going to glad you made the most"

Looking forward to more. Sounds like there will be plenty of action to come.
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Post by Mercenary » Fri, 11. Apr 03, 10:34

Corrected...

Cheers. :)
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Post by Al » Fri, 11. Apr 03, 10:40

Nice stuff. Looks as though Tor has the beginnnings of a reasonable empire and particularly with the official approval. :)

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SteveMill
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Post by SteveMill » Fri, 11. Apr 03, 10:42

Developing nicely Merc.
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Post by Adamskini » Fri, 11. Apr 03, 18:14

\o/
Aug 2000 -> March 2001 - Old Skool Egosoft Forum
March 2001 -> Nov 2002 - THQ forum
Nov 2002 -> now - Current, prettier Egosoft Forum

[anybody remember The Enforcers?!]
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Post by KiwiNZ » Sat, 12. Apr 03, 06:44

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Gandalf The White
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Post by Gandalf The White » Sun, 13. Apr 03, 00:57

As for the real enemy, it seems to me that our Argon Intelegence friend has his own agender. A mercenary is just that, a Mercenary. With a set code all of his own.

Good read Merc, looking forward to more.
some who deserve life receive death. Others who deserve death receive life. Can you give it to them? Don't be eager to deal out death in judgement, for not even the wise can see all ends.
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Post by Moss » Mon, 14. Apr 03, 01:51

Good read Merc, caught up with this chapter at least :) time to rumage around the forum, see if i've misssed anything else!
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