[STORY] Best Served Cold (Complete with Epilogue)

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[STORY] Best Served Cold (Complete with Epilogue)

Post by gsheriston » Sat, 30. May 09, 00:49

Firstly - this isn't going to be an ongoing story, it's more a back-story for a game start. Secondly, this might be the most fun evening I've had in the X-Universe, and I didn't even fire up the game... I haven't tried the scenario out, so if it turns out that the timing is all wrong and the real outcome would be very different, I apologise :) *see edit at the bottom, once you've finished reading.


And if it's boring, then I apologise for that too... Go easy on me, I've never done this before!


Best Served Cold

There was nothing I could do. I exited the jump-gate, the star-swirl clearing before my eyes and the familiar lurch of deceleration on re-entry to normal space. I brought up the sector map and located the TL that contained everything that mattered to me- and it was surrounded by ships, all of them hostile. I didn’t count them, didn’t even look to see what they were, I just pointed the nose in that direction and once more asked the engines for everything they had. It wasn’t enough. The missiles I launched distracted a couple, but the rest just kept pouring fire into the Mammoth.

I saw flashes in the distance then the canopy of my Discoverer darkened automatically as a series of large explosions seared the darkness of Brennan’s Triumph. When they finished, the Mammoth was gone, along with everything I owned except the Discoverer with its now unnecessary jumpdrive, and the 10,000 or so credits I had left.

We’d had far more of course, but that was gone after buying the station that would have supported us all, been our home and our income. But far more important than that, my family were on the Mammoth too, excited about seeing the power plant being built up from the masses of crates in the hold and looking forward to starting our new life on it. Cora and our children would never get the chance to watch the drones build our new home, or to decorate the kids’ rooms. Bethany would never get that first space-walk over the surface, trying to count the solar panels. Steven would never squeeze into the Discoverer’s seat with me again, figuring out the controls. Alice never got the chance to greet with a bouquet the first trader to visit us as she’d planned. And Cora never got the chance to actually spend some time with her husband as she thought she would, when he finally finished flitting about the systems making the money to buy the station. The weeks and months apart, missing my family growing up and being away from the woman I loved – all wasted. My future, our future, ended in a fireball of escaping gases and detonating fuel. My family died either in an explosion or in the cold vacuum of space, after an hour or more of fear and terror, because of one man’s impatience and my route choice...

It had taken pretty much every last credit we had to buy the station, hire the Mammoth, and get enough crystals together to start production. My old Mercury was on standby in Three Worlds, ready to start ferrying the e-cells from our new home out to local stations. We were all set for a new life together, but the TL pilot told us there was a problem – the jump drive had failed and there was a long way to go before we reached the safety of the Argon core systems. Worse than that was the slew of lawless pirate havens between us and Three Worlds, not something I wanted my family to see... So I told the Captain I’d sell the Merc then go and personally obtain a new jumpdrive – he could keep it, all I asked in return was that he wait for me to get back and let me dock the Disco for a lift to Three Worlds. I set off South from Light of Heart in a Discoverer Raider, and ordered the Mercury to the shipyard in Kingdom End.

Jumped-up son of a crooked Senator decided sitting around waiting wasn’t good enough for him, and started the trip anyway. I suppose he figured he was saving the e-cells for a bigger profit on the trip, or that sitting and waiting wasn’t earning him any money. I was taking the safe route from Light of Heart, through the Boron spur and Paranid core systems. I’d not quite reached Lucky Planets when Cora waved me that they had undocked.

The screen sparkled into life, the familiar gold cascade of hair surrounding her blue-grey eyes – a little narrower than usual they were, too.

“Um... Where are you? How long will it take? I think Captain Joyi’s decided not to wait, because we’re moving. Looks like we’re headed straight for the North gate rather than the Equipment dock, and we both know what route is the fastest to Three Worlds when your jumpdrive’s as cooperative as a Split in a Boron party-pool. I’ll keep you posted on where we are, don’t worry. But - don’t be any longer than you have to be. Love you.”

I never have understood why we can’t maintain a connection – we get instant real-time communications through gates, all information travels in packets- but if you want to talk to someone, it’s a series of holovid messages rather than a two-way link. I cut off the various curses I wanted to hurl at the Argon Mammoth’s captain and waved back.

“I’ve got the fastest ship that can hold a jumpdrive, the engines are as heavily tuned as the engineers dared. There’s no way I can get one faster. I’d have sent the Merc, but we need to sell it to buy the drive in the first place. I’m not too far from the west gate in Lucky Planets now, and everything’s humming along just fine. Maybe he’ll turn at Hatikvah’s Faith and head up through Teladi space? That should be fairly safe, and the Mammoth is a big investment so he won’t want it scratched. I’ll be back soon, hun.”

“Going through Teladi space would take twice as long. More, even. He’ll run straight for Split Fire, and we both know it. This will be a rough trip. We’re all going to need a break when we get to Three Worlds.”
Another face obscured my wife’s – an unruly mop of dark hair and brown eyes, our grinning six jazura old, Alice.
“Daddy! We’re moving, Daddy – are we nearly there?”
“Come on, Alice – Mummy’s trying to talk.”
Bethany’s voice was a bit muted, off-camera. Her hands appeared under Alice's arms and there was an excited squeal as Alice was tickled and lifted unceremoniously away by her big sister. Cora came back into view.

“Steve can’t tear himself away from the windows. I think if he thought he could get away with it he’d be up on the Bridge by now. But I’m going to try and find us a safe room in case things get chaotic later. Stay safe.”
I just kept streaking on through Boron and into Paranid space, selling the Mercury en-route with a hint of frustration at how it would set us back financially and a lot of worry about my family’s safety. Aladna Hill isn’t a big sector, and right now it was too small by at least half for my liking. It wouldn’t be long before they were at risk. I got a message just after I hit Trinity Sanctum.

“Well, we’re in Hatikvah’s Faith – and there’s no sign of a right turn just yet. Everything’s still quiet, but the crew are getting a bit jumpy. They know Joyi’s taking a risk and I don’t think they’re happy about it. I’ve got us a safe room midship, and at the first sign of trouble, that’s where we’ll go. On the way back I heard a couple of the hands talking – they were talking about warming up the guns, so at least they’re getting prepared. I don’t like this, Scott. I know you’re going as fast as she’ll take you, but where are you now?”

“Trinity Sanctum. I’m cutting corners wherever I can, but there aren’t many places where I can go West and North at the same time. For the first time ever, I wish I’d hired a slower transport ship. Does Joyi have fighters aboard? An escort wing? Anything?!”

“You know as much as I do – but I don’t think there’s anything beyond the ship’s own guns. Captain Joyi’s very proud of his crew and his ship’s shielding and firepower, he kept reeling figures off at me when I asked him about it.”

Not long after I got into Priest’s Pity, I heard something awful from Cora.
“We’re being tracked, Scott. I don’t know who by, but there are ships out there keeping pace with us. I’d love to say it’s an escort, but we got buzzed by one of them and the markings definitely didn’t look military. Steve tells me it was a Harrier, he was really excited at seeing one. And worse, we’ve lost our safe room. Joyi’s confined us to quarters, I guess he doesn’t want us getting in the way. So at least we’ll get a good view.”
She tried to smile, but she just looked sick. I could turn here – I could run North into Split Fire, then back East and South, I was only a few sectors away – but they were the Pirate sectors I wanted us all to avoid entirely. I was still only in a Discoverer, and also only a few sectors from the Jumpdrive. Speed was the biggest virtue of this ship, and the jumpdrive should be the priority, it would get us all away safely. I'd do no good running back to be a hero and getting killed on the way. I kept the nose pointing at the West gate and prayed, but by the time I was in Paranid Prime it was clear nobody was listening.

“They’re firing! Oh, gods – they’re firing. Joyi is shooting back, but his guns are too slow – big white balls, and these ships just dodge around them and between them. We’re taking a hell of a beating Scott, get us out of here!”

She was cut short by a burst of static, presumably plasma on the shields disrupting the transmission – at least, that’s what I hoped, and it made me sick – the best I could hope for was that someone was shooting at my family’s ship, because it was better than someone destroying it. I didn’t get much more than fragments from Cora for a while after that, but I was able to piece together some of it.

By the time I’d reached the Goner temple I was shaking with anger, frustration and a large amount of fear. By then they were entering Danna’s Chance with what sounded like “about half the shields missing” – the Mammoth was certainly armed, but it was no battleship. Set up mostly for long-range fire against the Khaak, the PPCs were no good against fast moving fighters unless the gunners got very lucky or the Pirates very careless. The main danger for the bandits was being run over by the ship, I think. The various lowlife scum who had swarmed around my family’s ship were apparently getting bolder and more numerous. They weren’t far from the rumoured base in Brennan’s Triumph. I could only hope that the Captain wouldn’t surrender the ship and leave everyone else at the mercy of the Pirates, because I didn’t think they would have any.

I don’t even know if Cora heard the message I sent while the drive was installed, thankfully it only took a few minutes to get it done – I’d been able to comm ahead so it was waiting for me and there was a docking clamp free. The drive is an external device on a ship this size, they’re easy to damage in a fight or collision – but for once I was glad of that. Bolt it in place, a couple of connections for power and data, and I was on my way.
I streaked away from the Temple, an old Goner’s words of peace and tranquillity ringing in my ears completely at odds with the panic and anger in my heart. The Disco was fast, but could it be fast enough? I didn’t have any energy cells and the nearest would be in Ore Belt so that’s where I went. I only needed a handful, but as I got close to the station I saw some Boron super-freighter undocking – I guess it wasn’t delivering crystals. The station was empty now, so I dashed North towards Terracorp HQ. Cora waved again, trying to keep the panic from her voice with Bethany sounding scared in the background. Steve was keeping Alice away from the windows, she said. They’d reached Brennan’s Triumph, so just a few sectors from safety – trying to put a brave face on it for Beth, but I could hear her shaking and it tore my soul. I should have diverted at Priest’s Pity, and been there with her. The Disco wasn’t much of a fighter and I wasn’t much of a pilot – but it was another target, a distraction, and one with teeth.

“There’s so many of them! The Captain’s keeping us moving, but we’re slowing down and I keep hearing alarms. People are running everywhere and a few minutes ago there was a huge bang under the keel. It shook the whole ship. I don’t know what it was, but the crew cheered – maybe they got one? It’s not enough, though. They’re everywhere, and we can’t hit them. Steve thinks it’s really exciting, he loves the lights and the fast ships but he doesn’t understand what they are. He’s 8 jazuras old, people are trying to kill us and he thinks he’s watching a holo or a fireworks display. The noise from the crew is scaring Alice, and Beth has gone very very quiet. Please Scott, just get here as soon as you can- bring help, a sector patrol, anything! We need you. I need you. Hurry...” I didn’t know it, but I would never hear that sweet voice again.

If I’d known I was going to be in a race like this, I’d have run those Pirate sectors myself and bought the jumpdrive from Terracorp... Thankfully they had plenty of energy available so I filled the hold. I barely cleared the docking clamps before I set the target for Brennan’s Triumph south gate, activated the jump sequence, willing the countdown to skip a couple and just GET ME THERE...

It didn’t, and I was too late.

By now there was nothing left. Just sparkling shards of metal and clouds of cooling gas mark the spot where my old life ended and a new one begins, right now. But I think it might be quite short, because I intend to kill every single Pirate I can find until one of them kills me. Not now, though. Now I have to run, and not just because there are about forty ships out there turning to look at who started throwing missiles into their murderous party. I have to run because revenge will have to wait until I can do it properly. I have a ship like a drinks can, shielded with gift-wrap and not much more than harsh words for weaponry. That must change, before I can begin. I want to hurt them, badly. I want to see those hulks they use for bases in smoking ruins, leave them as sparkling shards and cooling clouds. I’m going to need a bigger boat. Yes, it’s impossible to completely wipe out pirates – people take it up as a career every day. Yes, it’s a suicide mission – but my life means nothing to me now. Blinking through tears I set the navicomp to jump and fly to Argon Prime. If I can make the galaxy a little safer before some pirate picks me off, then I did something good- but if not, well, it won’t be important, not now. A furious vengeance is all that matters. Flashes in the distance, they’ve opened fire – but just like me, they’re too late. Activating jump-drive...







*edit--- I've now tried it, and the timing is indeed wrong at the beginning- but it's close at the end. Having the Mammoth leave when I hit Lucky Planets, it was still (just) in Light of Heart when I got to Trinity Sanctum... I arrived at the Temple while the Mammoth was in Noplileos' Memorial but the 10-minute delay at the temple brings it almost back to the right time-frame. In fact, my unarmed test Mammoth was destroyed in Danna's Chance as I was heading for Terracorp. Had it been armed, the PPCs would have given it a better survival chance OOS but as soon as I arrived in-sector they'd be as useless as described :)
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Post by Captain Chris sTc » Sat, 30. May 09, 12:16

That's an excellent read. A very dark look at the x'universe indeed. I like it a lot.

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Post by gsheriston » Sat, 30. May 09, 21:24

Captain Chris sTc wrote:That's an excellent read. A very dark look at the x'universe indeed. I like it a lot.
Many thanks, both for reading and taking the time to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it, would you like to hear more? I hope so, because while I know I said it wasn't going to be an ongoing story, Scott just wouldn't stay quiet. At least this one ends a little closer to a game start. I might actually have to play it...

Best Served Cold
Part 2 - Fully Fuelled

“Up you get!”

“Huhhngh...”

“Wake up, Scott Danna. You do not have to go home, but you cannot stay here. Closing time.”

“Uuuungh...”

I could just about open my eyes. I tried it, and regretted it. The lights of the bar seared them, so I let them shut quickly, and regretted that too. Felt like someone had put sandpaper on the inside of my eyelids, and as I started to get sensation back everywhere the blaring of the ‘Still Waters’ bar music hurt my ears. Someone was punching me in the head and stomach alternately, but from the inside. There was a vaguely-familiar sickly-sweet smell, stronger than I’d ever experienced it. I risked an eye again, it hurt again, but I stayed with it this time. The table I had my head on was scarred and pitted – clean, save for where I’d drooled in my drink-induced stupor, but it’d seen a lot of heads like mine in its time. What was that smell?

The bartender’s voice was insistent. Not harsh, but insistent. Boron voices can get like that sometimes, they’re good at managing charged situations – better than the aggression of a Split, or the disdain of a Paranid, certainly. It’s why they’re the bartenders here in Herron’s Nebula, things can get pretty charged at the Space Fuel Distillery. Me included. Right now though, I felt completely discharged. I tried to raise my head off the table, but a high-G manoeuvre like that was beyond me at the moment. A blue-green flipper eased under my head and lifted it to somewhere near vertical, while my stomach went into a flat-spin.

“I have called you a cab-bike. You should sleep in a bed tonight.” Two more flippers eased under my arms and lifted me to my feet – well, approximately. They looked like my feet, but they didn’t work very well. My eyes stayed fixed on the table, the half-empty glass of ‘fuel, and a pipe... A pipe? Spaceweed?! That’s what the smell was. I don’t take Spaceweed, Cora and Beth would kill me themselves, especially Beth after what happened to her friend Luci a couple of jazuras ago. So whose was that? I asked the bartender, but how he made out the words from the slurs I heard, I’ll never know.

“The Spaceweed is yours, Scott Danna. I must remove it soon, before the authorities arrive. Do you want to take it with you?” All the movement had really taken its toll on my stomach, and this tipped it over the edge. Most of its contents were liquid, and drained through the metal grating on the floor- smart design I thought, easy to clean – you just flush the under-tray every few mizuras... Probably essential in here.

“Take this, it will help settle your stomach.” The Boron handed me a tablet, and I put it into my mouth automatically- well, at the third attempt. It dissolved into a liquid as soon as it hit saliva and slid straight down my throat. I looked around, slowly, fearful of another reaction like the last. The bar was empty but for Loli Pa and myself, the tables all cleaned and most of them had chairs on them. The walls were dark, hazy and indistinct, but I think that was mostly me. Neon signs shone out of the dark advertising various meals and drinks but I couldn’t read any of them – not even the ones in Argon. A thick haze of smoke hung in the place, a mixture of various substances, some of them even legal, and possibly even originating from food... The thought sent my stomach through a tight loop again, but it stayed under control.

“You need to rest, Scott Danna. Sleep without fuel or weed, and let your body heal. Your mind and your heart, too”. The Boron voice was calming, and gentle. I guess he’d had a lot of practice looking after spacers in my state. It’s strange hearing someone use all your names all the time, but the Boron don’t make any distinction between first and family names – and they don’t use any honorific either, beyond the Royal Family. I smiled a little, thinking that Menelaus, the Party Princess herself, would probably have been proud of me what with the ‘fuel and the ‘weed and all. We reached the door, and the cool breeze of the station’s concourse was welcome. Of course, it’s all recycled air and moved artificially, but I needed some that didn’t smell of whiskey, or the weed. Or me. There was a cab-bike pulling up outside, and the door opened automatically. Loli Pa eased me inside, onto the barely cushioned and easily cleaned plastic bench then strapped me in.

“I do not wish to see you in my bar for at least a wozura, Scott Danna. You will not be served, if you return sooner. After that, you will be welcome. I will pass the message to the other bars. Take this with you, but do not use it. Sell it, if you can.” I hadn’t seen him pick it up, but Loli Pa had somehow grabbed the spaceweed pipe and now put it in my hands. Cora would be horrified, and Beth wouldn’t speak to me for weeks if they saw me with it. Something felt wrong, but in my addled state I couldn’t make it out. At least my stomach was settling now, whatever that tablet was – it was working. Whatever else felt wrong, I’d figure out in the morning. Loli Pa closed the door, and the cab-bike moved off slowly into the throng of the Distillery’s varied pedestrian traffic.

I don't remember how I got out of the cab-bike, let alone into my sleep-cell. I do know that I fell onto the bed still fully-clothed, then blackness engulfed me.

There was an insistent pinging and weird grumbling assaulting my ears and a sickly-sweet smell in my nose but thankfully no light in my eyes. The pinging was the mailbox, and the only way I was going to stop it was to read the message. That meant opening my eyes, so I steeled myself and prised them open. In front of them was the clock beside the bed, and as the figures came into focus I had my first surprise. OK, so I wasn’t going to figure out that ‘wrong’ feeling in the morning, because it was now afternoon. Um... tomorrow afternoon. That explained why my stomach was trying to fight its way out and go hunting for something to eat. I had just about enough strength to stand and walk the four steps to the infoterminal on the wall, where the message icon was blinking in time to the noise. I keyed the pad and read the message. It was from Argon Space Authorities.

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Your request for a registered name change on Discoverer Raider AM5-YRQ7 ‘Crystal Chaser’ has been approved.  The new name ‘Too Late’ has been lodged in the ASA database effective immediately
A hole opened up beneath me, and darkness swallowed me. The memories came flooding back, now there was no ‘fuel in the way and no weed haze to obscure them. Cora and Beth wouldn’t care about my smoking the weed now, they couldn’t ever see it. I was glad my stomach was so empty, it matched the rest of me all of a sudden. I staggered back to the bed and fell onto it, wracked with sobs and retching alternately, memories from the last few mazuras flashing before me. Slowly at first, in happier times, then degenerating into sharp, searing flashes as time caught up. Even the happier ones cut like a Split dagger.

........

Holding my wife’s shoulders, grinning, pulling her close and whispering in her ear, “We did it, Cora! I’ve got us just enough to buy the station. Don’t say anything to the kids yet – we’ll tell them we’re going on holiday and let them know while we’re on the shipyard. Only trouble is, we’ll have to go to Light of Heart rather than Argon Prime. It’ll be more expensive to get transport back, but even then it’s cheaper to get the station there and ship it back. I need to get crystals though, so we can fire it up. A wozura, maximum. Start booking us a trip to Light of Heart, to leave at the start of next mazura. Let me know if there’s anything exotic you want me to pick up for our rooms, I’m going to be all over the place getting these crystals together. Boron bed, perhaps?” I felt her arms tighten and I swear I heard her smile before she spoke – or purred... “that sounds lovely... Going to be strange finding you in my bed on a regular basis again, but I’m sure I’ll get used to it!”

........

Boarding the Express at the Antigone Memorial trading station a few wozuras later, with Alice asleep on my shoulder and Steve clinging to his mother’s hand, eyes everywhere and constantly asking questions, Beth looking bored at the prospect of a long trip to some rotten old space station, her earphones emitting a tinny rattle.

........

Strapping the two youngest into their seats and taking ours, and the weight of my old trading life slipping from my shoulders as if the Express engines had pulled it away when it left the docking clamp. My wife’s hand squeezing mine and her head on my shoulder as she muttered “It all begins here. I never thought I’d see this day, all those long jazuras while you were trading. I’m proud of you. I just wish you could have spent more time with us.” “I know, but all that will soon be over. Once we’re up and running, the traders will come to us.” “What if they don’t?” “Well... It takes a while for word to get around of a new station of course. We still have the Mercury, so we can sell the e-cells ourselves until people notice we’re there. And another reason to buy from Light of Heart, there’s a Disco Raider waiting for us, to run and fetch crystals. Came cheap with the station, and they’re just not available at Argon Prime. Trust me, I learned a lot about crystal-hunting this last mazura. We need something fast, to get the best deals. I lost count of the number I lost because someone beat me to a crystal fab. Merc for selling e-cells in bulk; Disco for buying crystals in small quantities, at speed. We’re ready, Cora. It’s just a matter of time, now.”

........

Playing in the surf of an ocean planetside in Light of Heart, splashing water at Beth and teaching Alice to swim, lying on orange sand beside Cora and being buried by Steve and the girls, paragliding off cliffs and back into the ocean, and boarding the shuttle back to the Shipyard at the end of it. Exhilarated and exhausted in equal measure, but happier than we’d all been in a long time.

........

“Are we going home now, Daddy?” We’d reached the Shipyard, and it was almost time for the young ones to sleep. Steve realised the holiday was over, and Beth knew something was up but wasn’t sure what- she got suspicious when we went to the Shipyard rather than the Trading Station. As smart as her mother, that one. “Not quite...” Bethany looked up, suddenly interested. “Why do you say that?” I walked us all over to an observation bubble on the shipyard’s main spine, looking down at a huge Mammoth transport being loaded with a myriad of massive crates – each one getting visibly smaller as it entered the compression field of the cargo bay. “You see all those crates? It’s a Solar Power Plant, and it’s ours. That’s going to be our new home. We’re going to Three Worlds on that Mammoth, just as soon as Captain Joyi tells us it’s fully loaded.” Beth’s face was a picture. She had a long mane of my dark hair, and the contrast with her suddenly pale skin was very dramatic, red-glossed lips in a perfect ‘O’. She almost dropped her media player, she was so shocked –and I thought she’d had that surgically implanted into her hand. “REALLY?! I don’t believe you. It’s got to be a joke. Prove it to me.” I pulled out the compad from my pocket and called up the station’s manifest, located the Mammoth and showed her the loading order with my name on it. I didn’t think she could get any paler, but somehow she managed it. “So this means you won’t be trading anymore? I actually get to see my Dad for more than a wozura at a time? Can I spacewalk? How many panels does it have?”

I laughed.”Yes, yes, yes, and... count them yourself. Bet you can’t!” “I will. Teach me to spacewalk, and I’ll tell you how many there are.” Now Cora laughed too. “I’ve seen the specs, dear – it’ll take you a mazura to count them all. You might be better trying mathematics to get the answer! But Captain Joyi says we’ll be loaded by morning, so in less than a wozura you’ll have your chance to try...” “Tell you what, you can keep them clean – that’ll help you count them!” For some reason, I don’t think Beth liked my suggestion much. I think it was the way she stuck her tongue out at me. She switched subjects quickly, before I mentioned work again. "I thought we didn't have much money? That must have cost millions!" Cora answered her. "Not quite that much, but a fair amount. I know it's been hard on us all, but do you think now that it's been worth it?" Beth looked out of the window, then turned back and nodded. “Will people come to trade with us?” Alice sounded sleepy, but she was definitely awake. “Yes, they will. They’ll come from all over the place.” “People like you, Daddy?” I smiled. “Yes, people like me. But others, too – Teladi, Boron, even Split and Paranid.” Her nose wrinkled as she thought, but her voice was decisive when she spoke. “I'll give them flowers when they come. Then they’ll want to come back.”

........

“Daddy, I can’t sleep. It's too hot.” Steve was shaking my shoulder, and I whispered trying not to wake Cora. “OK, son – let’s go and look at something cool, shall we?” I dressed, and asked him to do the same. “I want to show you something, I think you’ll like it.” I left Cora a brief note, telling her I’d taken Steve to see the new Discoverer. When we got there, young Steven couldn’t believe his eyes. “Wow! Is that ours too? Can we look inside?” I opened the hatch and showed him where to stand – then told him to wait. I slid into the seat, and beckoned him up to sit in my lap. I slowly ran through a pre-flight checklist with him, showed him what all the controls were, even gave him a few pointers on how to fly but by now the excitement and lateness of the hour was taking its toll and his head was starting to nod. He walked back to the elevator, but I carried him into his room and laid him down beside his younger sister.

........

Walking with Cora and the kids down to get breakfast from a noisy shipyard restaurant, everyone dressed and packed, ready to go. The compad trilled in my pocket, and when I pulled it out I saw the Mammoth Captain’s face. “Go on, Cora – I’ll catch you up in a mizura”

“Mr. Danna? Captain Joyi here. We’re fully loaded and ready to go, just waiting for your family to board. However, systems checks this morning have shown a problem with the jumpdrive that wasn’t there yesterday, and our engineers aren’t having much luck fixing it. I’ve requested assistance, but the Goners say it’s going to be another wozura before they can get to us and I can’t wait that long. TerraCorp wouldn’t even return my call. I have another near-system contract ready to go and I would be happy to come back and complete our contract after that job, but it will cost you almost our contract’s value to unload, store and reload the station. What do you want to do?”

That extra cost would finish our reserves, even if I sold the Mercury. But, selling the Merc would give us another option...

“How long can you wait? As you know, I have a fully-tuned Discoverer Raider here on-station. I can go to Cloudbase South West and pick up a new drive then jump back here – shouldn’t be more than a tazura, if that. Once it’s installed, it’s yours- so you can keep working while your old unit is fixed. A spare jumpdrive, if you’ll wait that tazura. Is it a deal?”

“I don’t like waiting, Mr. Danna. It gives the crew time to get lax, and I like to run a tight ship. Have your family board, and be back here by the end of this tazura. I’ll get the crew to polish out a few scratches while we wait.”

We finished breakfast, and while the kids collected their bags I told Cora what I had to do. “One more run, and shorter than usual, too. I have to take the Disco to the Goner Temple for a new jumper, the one on the Mammoth has a glitch. Joyi doesn’t know what’s wrong and neither you nor I want to trust a faulty jumpdrive, do we? I know you’ve heard the same stories I have, because I told you them myself.” “No way. I’m not getting you all to myself at last only for you to get turned inside out on the last leg of the trip. Go quickly; I’ll be waiting for you...” The wink and playful chuckle almost stopped me leaving entirely – but I certainly wanted to be back fast. I kissed her and strode off to the docking bay towards our new Discoverer Raider.

“Shipyard Control, this is M5 Crystal Chaser requesting departure clearance”

“Crystal Chaser, Shipyard Control. You are cleared for departure. Be aware Mammoth at Southern pier docked and loading, heavy traffic zone.”

“Roger, Shipyard Control – request clearance for flyby of Mammoth, it’s loading my station and my family are aboard”

“Approved, Crystal Chaser. Give them a wave from us. Safe trip.”

It was good to hear real voices from a controller, the automated interaction system got dull after jazuras of trading. I waved Cora. “Get yourselves out to a window on the port side, and look out for a visitor!”

“We’re already there, and watching. About half-way down the top row of cabins, we’re flashing the lights so you can see us!” Smart lady, my Cora; I hadn’t thought about how I would find them.

The Disco was a joy to fly after the Mercury’s ponderous turning and stately acceleration. She was faster than a Teladi’s promise and turned like a Split’s temper. It was going to be a fun trip... And there was the flashing light, right where she said it would be. I nudged the Crystal Chaser to within a couple of dozen meters – any closer and I’d have hit the shields- and rolled the ship so I could look up at them waving at me. I waggled the wings, pointed the nose away and hit the boost extension. The pressure pushed me back into my seat and my family sent me a wave-message. I say ‘message’, it was more a collection of excited oohs and aaahs- mostly from Steve- but even Beth sounded impressed. I imagine she wanted to swap places, she hated waiting as much as the Captain did.

........

“Goner Temple Control, M5 Crystal Chaser requesting emergency approach”

“Crystal Chaser, this is the Goner Temple Control. Emergency approach granted, Pier three clamp B will be free. State the nature of emergency.”

“Control, I need a jumpdrive fitted as fast as you can manage it – TL in Danna’s Chance under pirate attack with my family aboard and a broken jumpdrive, what’s your record for fitting one? You can take payment now if it will help.”

“Understood, Crystal Chaser – fitting team is mobilising now, we can have you spaceborne in ten mizuras after docking. We have payment, stay in your ship on contact.”

“Decrease speed, Crystal Chaser- you cannot dock at your present speed. Thank you. Docking speed achieved, contact in 4..3..2......capture. Stay in your ship.”


They were the longest ten minutes of my life. I checked out my route to the nearest SPP, but couldn’t see prices or stock levels. I was sweating and shaking in my suit. Nothing I could do but wait, so I waved Cora hoping it would get through.

“Cora, I don’t know if you can hear me, but I’m at the Temple. They’re fitting the drive right now, and it’s almost done. I just need cells to power the jumper so I have to go over to Ore Belt. I’ll be there soon. I love you.”

........

The sinking feeling as I saw the SPP stock level drop to zero

........

The flashes as I emerged from the jump into Brennan’s Triumph

........

The canopy darkening around me, as if Crystal Chaser was trying to shield me from the death of the Mammoth and with it everything I cared about, though their light still shone through it.

........

The sick feeling as the Crystal Chaser jumped away from Brennan’s Triumph and the remains of my family, matched by the lurch of re-entry at the south gate of Argon Prime, narrowly missing an Express and almost drifting into a Centaur patrol but not caring or even really seeing.

........

Punching the throttle and heading North, not noticing anything but the raw feel of my throat and the salt taste of tears in my mouth- I guess I must have screamed in Brennan’s Triumph, but hadn’t noticed.

........

Setting the autopilot to dock at the Distillery. I don’t know what I hoped to find there, but it was a good hole to sink into for a while.

........

Ordering that first Space Fuel, and the second, third, fifth, tenth... explaining to Loli Pa just what I was doing there and why I needed oblivion.

........

Regaining consciousness that first night and stumbling to my room only to completely fail to sleep and being outside Loli Pa’s bar when it opened.

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Repeating that same routine for almost two wozuras.

........

And now, two wozuras after I lost everything, it feels like I’ve just lost it all again. It can’t be replaced, but people are going to pay anyway. I auto-laundered the suit while I showered, then gathered my few things, left the spaceweed in the room, and locked the door punching the ‘check-out’ key. I wouldn’t be coming back. My head felt clear again, sharper even than usual. I suppose it’s a single purpose with no distractions, it gives one an incredible focus. I needed a bigger ship, and that would take money. I’d burned a large hole in the 10000 credits I’d had left from the Merc sale and jumper purchase buying energy cells at TerraCorp, and a few missiles en-route at Paranid Prime to distract the Pirates when I arrived. Not that it had made any difference. But now I was down to my last couple of hundred, after my stay on the distillery with its booze and weed costs, and sleep-cell prices. I didn’t need the Jumper right now, maybe I could sell it on and try to trade up to a Buster. Get that kitted out properly, and I could start making some serious trouble for people...

But it seemed the Galaxy hadn’t finished kicking me yet, because when I got to Crystal Chaser... sorry, Too Late as it’s called now, I saw only broken bolts and empty sockets where the Jumper was supposed to be. That’s the other disadvantage with them being external, not only are they easily damaged, they’re easily stolen. Especially if you know the owner is fully ‘fuelled in a bar somewhere topside in the station. Just one more reason to wipe the Galaxy clean of those who have no respect for the law. I suppose I should be grateful the ship is still here. If I get it right, a lot of people will be sorry she wasn’t stolen too. It seems harsh, changing the name of the ship like that when she had done flawlessly everything I asked of her- but it was a reflection on me, not the ship. I ignited her engines and slipped the docking clamp. Heading south carefully avoiding asteroids, I checked the empty hold and my remaining 1145 credits. It wasn’t much, but it was a start. And somebody always needs a lift somewhere in a hurry...

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Post by Captain Chris sTc » Sun, 31. May 09, 03:03

Awesome an update. That was defiantly unexpected. You definatly have the skill of raising the reader up then dashing them back to the starck reality. yet making them want more, and to find out how/if revenge happenens and pirates are liberated from their life of plunder to a stae of repaying for their and their kinds sins.

I eagerly await the prospect of more :D

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Post by gsheriston » Mon, 1. Jun 09, 01:35

Best Served Cold
Part 3 - A New Life

Something’s not right. ‘Too Late’ was faster than this when I was running to the Goner Temple, and she turned faster too. I have a nasty feeling there was more than just scoring where those pond-scum took my jumpdrive. I guess it just shows how distracted I am at the moment, not doing a full pre-flight. Or maybe it’s a subconscious suicide attempt; after all, blasting off in a ship you’ve not checked and you know has been tampered with isn’t the smartest idea. I could go EVA and check it out, but for now it seems to be spaceworthy so I’ll head for the Trading Station and check it in a pressurised atmosphere.

“You are talking to the automated interaction system. Make your request”

“Request docking clearance”

“Positive...” <click> I’d heard it before. Lots and lots of times. Now, where are those green position-lights?

“Successfully docked” Great, thanks – being inside, with data and power cables attached to the nose wasn’t quite confirmation enough. I hopped out of the Disco and took a look around underneath. Yep, there’s the evidence. Isn’t it bad enough that we have criminals, without making them stupid as well? I mean, the jumper was fitted to my ship in ten mizuras. So, it could probably have been removed completely cleanly in that time as well. I’m assuming I got targeted for the theft, so they knew how much time they’d have by the garbage coming out of my mouth or my chemically-induced slumber... Why, then, did they make such an Argnu’s ear out of the job? As it is, they’ve broken one of the connectors so the jumper’s useless to them – no sleep lost as far as I’m concerned- but in cutting the bolts it looks like they’ve taken out my specialist engine and rudder components too. Some people just shouldn’t be trusted with oxy-acetelene. Maybe I should check out the compression in the hold, just in case that’s damaged...

Just as I thought. I have no idea how, but they’ve managed to break that too. Or maybe the jump wasn’t quite fast enough at Brennan’s Triumph. Or perhaps some other lowlife took a pry-bar to the M5 while I was drinking and sleeping my way through two weeks at ‘Still Waters’. The readings inside all say it’s fully compressed, up to speed and maximum rudder operation – but none of those are true. Perhaps it’s best if I just go and sell the ship – replace it with a new Discoverer, this one has too many painful associations for me anyway. With luck, the Shipyard will just make the exchange without enquiring too closely. I won’t hide it if they ask, but I won’t be telling them up-front either. Let's call it 'terminological ambiguity'. First, though, I need to patch up that scoring in case there’s a bigger crack hiding behind it. Then I need a drink.

Funny how ‘a drink’ comes in half-a-dozen glasses, isn’t it? I woke up in a sleep-cell on the trading station, still fully dressed with the stink of whiskey and weed on my clothes. At least this time it was real sleep, and the weed smell was faint enough for me to believe I hadn’t been smoking the stuff, and I’d managed to keep everything inside my stomach, but it was still a foul atmosphere to wake up in. Pretty foul-tasting, too. Maybe Loli Pa was right, and I should lay off the ‘fuel for a while. Breakfast, that would.... um... no. Breakfast would be a bad idea right now, since I was doing so well with the ‘not-throwing-up’. Best not take chances. But if I was planning to sell the ship, it would also be important not to smell of booze and weed – I needed to clean up, I looked like I’d gone two rounds of Triskele and not slept for a couple of weeks; which to an extent was correct. It was almost a pleasant surprise, I actually looked better than I felt. The last time I’d shaved it’s clear I’d been shaking, too. Or maybe just drunk. Whatever, I needed to do something about it. I could launder the suit again but to be honest, I wanted a new one. Old associations, you see. It’s strange what can set you off, even just running my hand up my arm to my shoulder- where Cora’s hand had rested the last time I kissed her– and I could feel it start to eat away at me. I knew if I didn’t lose the suit, and the ship, I’d become attached to them as the last reminders of my family – grow obsessed over them if you like. They would become things I couldn’t live without, the sort of thing you’d reach back into a dying ship for and get caught in an explosion rather than being those extra couple of meters clear and riding the shockwave. Getting sentimental about the ship is no use if I wanted to go killing people because fast as she was, Too Late didn’t have the teeth to do it.

A stazura later, I looked like a different person. Crisp new flight suit, properly shaved, showered – I’d even managed to eat something. Time to go to work. I know there are two things I really want to do. If I live long enough, I want to build that Power Plant in Three Worlds, in honour of my family. And I want to watch, while explosions I’ve caused break the spine and split the panels of the Pirate base in Brennan’s Triumph. I want to see escaping gases and the bodies of dead and dying pirates blown out of the holes. I can’t do that with just one Discoverer Raider. I climbed back into my ship and fired the engines. It took three attempts to get them started, which really sealed it. She had to go. Whether it was my repair work or more mischief I’d not seen, the poor ship had taken a kicking in her short life - just one mazura, and she was a wreck. It wasn't even my doing. She gave me no joy to fly any more, and that was a stark contrast to how I felt the first time I handled these controls. Though, those were happier times too. I pointed the nose South, and hit the boost extension. Even that didn’t work. What had they done to her? Clearly the Raider and I weren't compatible, I needed to move her on for the good of her own health.

I was shocked at how busy Argon Prime looked. Last time I flew through here I was going in the opposite direction, quite a lot faster, and not paying any attention to anything very much. The sector could have been emptier than President’s End and I wouldn’t have noticed. Now it was a riot of traffic and quite an effort to stay out of trouble. I set the autopilot for the Federal Argon Shipyard and hoped nobody had mangled those systems...

Too Late and I made it in one piece to the Shipyard, and I commed the sales area to ask for an appointment. They could see me right away, which suited me perfectly. I wound up in a plush-looking area with holodisplays everywhere, lots of 'configure your ship' devices for those who wanted the additional touches of luxury. The young lady they had there waiting for me was sharply dressed, she had a sweet voice and a very engaging smile, bright enough that I felt I should be behind shields. Definitely a Sales type. "What can we do for you, Mr. Danna?"

"I need to change my ship. I've made a couple of bad choices, been suckered in by the brochure, that sort of thing. Essentially I bought the wrong ship."

"Oh, I'm sorry to hear that Mr. Danna. We take some considerable pride in customer satisfaction so it's unusual for someone to return a ship to us."

I held up my hands. "It's entirely my fault - and more to the point, I didn't buy the ship from here, it came from Light of Heart. It's a Discoverer Raider. Look, I’m not really concerned about haggling over prices. I want to trade the Raider in for a brand-new standard variant Discoverer, and have a little cash left over. She’s too fast, too twitchy and just a little short on cargo space for my liking. Can you help me out, or not?”

The PPC-bright smile came back, and she leaned a little closer, her voice dropping to conspiratorial tones. “I think we can, Mr. Danna.” I didn’t like the sales lady already. She was being just a little too familiar – or maybe I was just being a little too sensitive – but she was closer than I liked, and I just wanted to get away. “I just need your declaration that it’s not a stolen ship, and there’s nothing left in the hold. It wouldn’t be the first time we’d had a ship arrive with the real owner in the cargo bay!” The laugh grated on my nerves.

I’d heard the story from Loli Pa – Hari Gul had vanished outside ‘Still Waters’ on the Distillery a couple of jazuras ago, and his body was never found. His ships had been stolen, it was rumoured that he’d been fed into the cargo compression field without life support installed and there was a Mercury running around somewhere with a 20mm cube of his DNA in the hold, but I don’t know how true that is. It’s a good story, so it doesn’t really matter.

I signed the lady’s paper and handed over the access codes for Too Late, and that was it. I’m sure I was ripped off, but it was getting harder to care. 40 mizuras later, I had a brand-new Discoverer, fully upgraded engines that actually went as fast as they said they did, 4 alpha IREs, one lousy 1MW shield and 12,000 credits to my name. Pretty poor, for someone who’d bought a station two wozuras ago – but that wasn’t me any more. That was another man, a happier one, with a family and a future ahead of him. I could see my future, it would be filled with discomfort, and pain, and death – hopefully other people’s, but mine eventually. I just want to see that pirate base burn, first. I still need a bigger ship. And guns. Lots of guns.




<Author's note - this is almost the 'Aspiring Explorer' start for X3-Reunion- though that starts you in Cloudbase South East. I think I'm going to have to play it, to find out how long Scott can last. Anyone interested in seeing what happens?>

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Post by Captain Chris sTc » Mon, 1. Jun 09, 14:40

Guess he did the shipyard over. trade in a broken ship for a new one. I like your theory on living creatures in cargo holds with out life support.
Didn't ejected pilots turn in to meat products when you picked them up with out life support in X²?

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Post by collins50 » Mon, 1. Jun 09, 17:18

Good Story,
But a Hard life to start with.

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Post by The Zig » Tue, 2. Jun 09, 00:26

Hi,
I saw this last night, just finished it so far (I'm a slow reader!)

Very good. I love the tone, and you've got some really great moments in there - loved the line about his stomach breaking out and hunting for food. Nice!
Personally, I'm a sucker for revenge stories at the best of time, but this is good.

Hope to see more!

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Post by gsheriston » Tue, 2. Jun 09, 01:59

Thanks to everyone who's been reading, and anyone who has been looking forward to the next installment. I have indeed started playing the game and all game-specific events you read below have taken place. Even the one that left me speechless, thinking 'no way!'.


I swear I'm having more fun writing than playing, too... Thank you for your support so far!


Best Served Cold
Part 4 - First Contact

I’m beginning to think the Galaxy really doesn’t like me. Everyone hates me. From what I can see, the Paranid won’t let me dock, the Split wouldn’t even talk to me, even the Goner would only let me buy Salvage insurance... What did I do while I was drinking Loli Pa dry? Did someone bust me for Spaceweed use? Steal my ID?

Actually, that’s more possible than I’d like to think about. Someone could be out there, ruining my good name – and it was good, I was an honest and respectable trader for 20 jazuras before I boarded that Express to Light of Heart. I was welcome in the core sectors of five races, and now suddenly I’m a nobody again. Pariah, even, to some of them. The ever-forgiving Goner called me a sceptic now, just two wozuras after granting me emergency docking privileges and fitting me a jumper in record time. I must have done something really awful in a past life to have to suffer all this. I just hope I enjoyed it.

At least the Argon will still let me dock. And they did sell me the Discoverer, which I’ve had registered as ‘First Step’. And that’s all it is, a step along the way. I’m not going to ‘bond’ with the ship. I won’t let myself get sentimental over it, as soon as it doesn’t suit the purpose and I can afford something bigger/better/nastier then it’s gone. First priority is to get some slightly thicker gift-wrap around me, but to do that and still have trading capital – I need either a lot of e-cell trading or a lucky break. Somehow, I don’t think that ‘lucky break’ is very likely... Do you?

So, I run a (full, this time) pre-flight on First Step and settle in. Someone always wants to be somewhere else. One thing I’m good at, and that’s going to places. Specially around this area. So – bulletin board. Naturally, everyone is quite happy where they are today. Figures. But what’s that? Pandora’s found something, out in Cardinal’s Domain. I remember when they launched her, just a couple of jazuras ago – from this very shipyard in fact. Ugly beast, antennae and scientific instruments everywhere- but very, very quick when out of traffic. Designed to boldly go where no-one has gone before, and still get home before the crew go crazy. Even if the crew is a computer. Completely unarmed, but massively shielded – I suppose you could say the whole ship is one big kinetic energy weapon... The Pandora missile, not available in any Equipment Dock... But I’m wasting time. I need shields, so how much are they?

And now I see just how much I’ve been ripped off by the Shipyard. The engines are fully-tuned, 320+ top speed which is respectable but nowhere near Too Late’s original 400+. Probably about what she could do when I left her, though. Poor ship, I hope she gets fixed up and finds a careful (and luckier) owner. She didn’t deserve what she went through in my care. So, engines are maxed-out... but we’re missing a lot of rudder tuning and I have a cargo hold of just ten units. TEN? I’d barely fit in there myself! The shield (yes, singular) and guns take up half of it. This is where the shipyard made their money; there were 4 shields on Too Late, a full raft of (admittedly broken) engine and rudder tunings. And a cargo bay almost ten times my current free space. Again, admittedly broken. All the software, the trading system extension, the lot. I’ve got a duplex scanner rather than triplex, which hurts. I learned early on in my trading career that being able to see trouble meant I could stay out of it. Well – time to see what my new girl can do. At least she starts first time, which is good.

A few short mizuras later and I’m staring at the trade menu at the Equipment dock. I could afford a couple of 1MJ shields, but it would leave me with next-to-nothing. And it looks like that’s pretty much all I can buy, which is a bit harsh. I’m sure people used to like me more than this. To hell with it. I’ll take the risk and keep the single shield, it’s not like I’m about to go into combat. So, who needs a lift? Nobody. The same news on the Pandora discovery, couple of other items from waaaay over there in Getsu Fune. This isn’t going well. OK, let’s pick a station at random. Quantum Tube fab, won’t take long.

Well, that looks more promising. I can get 2609 credits if I ship something to The Hole – but to do so, I need M4-class. However, they are very short of Cahoonas. I smell profit. Quick jaunt south to Home of Light, and I get a rude shock. I can buy Cahoonas, but I can only carry one. ONE Cahoona. That does it, I need to increase this hold and fast. It’s never going to be a Mercury, but this is ridiculous. I head for the Trading Station and increase it by 20, leaving me with 7030 credits. And when I get back to the Bakery, all the stock has gone. Normal service has been resumed. Fuming, I turn without thinking and head South. Just as I’m leaving I remember last time I was here, and glance back up at Terracorp. Tears blur everything as I hear Cora’s voice crackling through plasma bolts.


“We need you. I need you. Hurry...”


I don’t know if the heave in my stomach was from the memory or because I’d just crossed the event horizon in the gate. When I arrived in Ore Belt, I targeted the SPP and hit thrusters. And, it’s virtually bursting with e-cells. Where were all these when I needed them? Maybe those extra few mizuras could have made all the difference, I could have launched more missiles, got closer, maybe drawn some away... When I dock, they’re selling at 13 so I fill the hold. All 25 spare units of it. I’ve still got some change, so I head for the Trading Station and increase it by another 10 – still have some money, so I go back and fill up. But, just as I’m docking, I notice red blips on the Gravidar. M5 class. Cells are at 12 now, so I fill the extra hold space. Gods, this has been difficult. That moment in Home of Light really took it out of me. Maybe a drink will help steady me? Just the one, though.

Amazingly, only ten mizuras later, and I’m out of the bar and back in my ship. I’m actually feeling good, for a change. The ‘fuel really helped. I feel like I can take on anything... and there was that little red dot. Revenge has to start somewhere. You will do nicely. Especially since you’re being distracted by the Argon security forces right now. The Harrier Raider won’t stay still in the sights, and the sights aren’t auto-correcting because I don’t have any fight software... This fact hadn’t registered until now. I’ve never fired weapons at anything except in self-defence, and now I’m about to deliberately pull the trigger on another being in anger. Lots of anger. With every intent to kill them. They say the first kill is the hardest, and I think I see why. Steve might have thought it was cool for his Dad to charge in all guns blazing – but Cora and Beth definitely wouldn’t want me to hurt anyone. Neither would Steve if he understood what it meant. I wasn’t even sure I could do it myself. Even if I’d seen this Harrier in Brennan’s Triumph, watched it fire the final shot into the Mammoth – did I have the right to take the pilot’s life? Shouldn’t they stand trial for what they’ve done?


“They’re firing! Oh, gods – they’re firing.”


No. They shouldn’t. I intend to give that pilot every chance that was offered to my beloved and our family, and that means ‘none at all’. Now I know I should pull the trigger, do I have the skills? Without the compensation of the fight software, can I actually hit the ship?

It seems I can’t. Well, not at first. A long stream of IRE fire goes ahead of, then behind, the Harrier Raider. Finally, it connects and the Argon pirate (I won’t use the word ‘man’ for this offal) offers a fair stream of invective my way about looking cool as space debris. I connect again, and again. Either it’s getting easier, or something’s guiding my hand, because now his shields are gone and I’m chewing into the hull. It seems he’s lacking in the ‘going down with the ship’ mentality, because he begs me to stop shooting and pops the hatch. My first deliberate combat, and my opponent got so scared he’s bailed out of his ship? What’s going on here, my luck doesn’t run this way... And he doesn’t get away quite that easily. But there is another Harrier close by, and I can’t afford to hang about plotting nasty ways to kill a space rat. Thankfully, the Harrier is being harried by Argon forces – but he/she/it drifts into my sights and I pull the trigger. The military pilots have done most of the work, but I get credited with the kill. Maybe this ‘combat’ lark isn’t so hard after all? And there’s still another M5 red blip out there, so where are you? Ah. Over there, by the North gate. And... it’s Xenon? What are they doing here? I’ve never even seen a Xenon ship and yet here I am about to open fire on one. It doesn’t appear to have noticed me, maybe I’m not machine enough for it. So, weapons-free. Squeeze the trigger, and miss completely. Try again, and another miss. Third time lucky, yes?

No.

The N finally triggers a ‘being shot-at’ subroutine and pivots on the spot, launching a swft blaze of IRE fire in my direction. I assume this does have the ‘fight’ software, because I now have no shields and am missing a good chunk of hull. But, as it turns again, I manage to squeeze off a broadside and the N gets a reprogramming it will never forget. Thankfully, the hull damage hasn't impaired the engines at all.

I’m now free to go back and clean up some unfinished business. I locate the free-floating Harrier Raider, and nearby the fleeing Pirate. I close rapidly, and sit right behind him – just 16 m from his back. 10m. I nudge just slightly closer, and fire a single burst that misses him by about two meters. The pirate actually stopped, and turned to face me. His arm raises, and he makes a few unpleasant gestures at me. I will not tolerate this any longer. This thing must die. I back off a few meters, and both his arms raise, as if in triumph. I assume he thinks I’ve been scared off. I haven’t. The four alpha-IREs strike him dead-centre and the suit simply evaporates. It’s far more satisfying than I could have imagined, yet I still feel empty.

Perhaps that’s Cora’s disapproval I can feel. Or Beth, wondering what her Dad has just become. I can tell you, Beth, though I wouldn't want to. I've become a murderer. Cold-hearted, cold-blooded murderer. I need a drink.

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Post by Captain Chris sTc » Tue, 2. Jun 09, 22:49

No more mister nice guy
No more mister clean
No more mister nice guy
They say hes sick , hes obscene...

Would i be right that you playing Reunion?

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Post by gsheriston » Tue, 2. Jun 09, 23:45

Captain Chris sTc wrote:Would i be right that you playing Reunion?
Yes, sir :)

Even got enough material for another update, but have been reading The Zig's epic this evening (which is frankly awe-inspiring in its scope!) so I'll have to write that one another day. I will write it though...

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Post by gsheriston » Wed, 3. Jun 09, 01:14

The Zig wrote:Hi,
I saw this last night, just finished it so far (I'm a slow reader!)

Very good. I love the tone, and you've got some really great moments in there - loved the line about his stomach breaking out and hunting for food. Nice!
Personally, I'm a sucker for revenge stories at the best of time, but this is good.

Hope to see more!
Thank you! :) Having just read "Terraformer Dreams" start-to-finish this evening, your opinon means a great deal. I'm just glad I got to read it all at once rather than having to wait for the updates, that might have been painful... That's one outstanding story, and beautifully told. Loved Jo's falling asleep, and the dreams of the Paranid colonists... dark, but so well done! It's littered with brilliance and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Trouble is, I'm now torn - do I start on First House, or write up Scott's reaction to his first kill?!

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Post by gsheriston » Thu, 4. Jun 09, 01:37

Best Served Cold
Part Five - Face the Music

It doesn’t really hit home until I pull up by the abandoned Harrier Raider. Fifteen mizuras ago, this ship had a live pilot. The seat is probably still warm. But the pilot isn’t. The pilot’s atoms are now floating all over this asteroid field, and I made it happen. He hadn’t done anything to me personally, but I killed him because of who he was. I’m starting to have my doubts, now, about my planned course of action and whether I can carry it out. It’s a bit late though, because I’ve already crossed a number of lines I never thought I would even see. I’ve opened fire on someone without provocation. I’ve destroyed ships that hadn’t attacked me. And, by far the worst – I killed someone in cold blood. Someone who posed no threat and couldn’t fight back, someone who had given me his ship to specifically to stop me from killing him. And now he’s scattered to the four corners of the sector, because I shot him at point-blank range.

What right did I have to do that? Is my family’s murder justification enough? I know they would have hated me for doing what I’ve done, have I just thrown away the person they loved in the first place? Was it worth it? Futz it, why didn’t I just take the cost and unload the station when Joyi gave me the option? Or stayed, followed and fought and died with the Mammoth?

It’s too late now to mourn him, or to change what I've done - but I offered a silent prayer to whichever Gods might be listening to judge him fairly. It was as much mercy as I was prepared to give, even though I was starting to feel sick to my stomach again. The ship was useless to him now – I might as well claim it. Perhaps even improve the ship’s Karma by doing good deeds in her. 25m is close enough for me to hop out of the Discoverer and fire the recognition disc onto the Harrier’s hull. It will give me basic navigation until I can get it to a station and get access to the computers in peace. I don’t like hanging out here in space, having just killed a pilot in exactly this situation. Well, not quite this situation... I drifted around to the nose of First Steps, and backed off a little. There, that’s about the range he was. Dear Gods, it looked scary from this end. Fearing for my own safety, I hit the thrusters and got back inside where it was (a little) safer. Finally I can check out my new shot-riddled prize, and it looks like I’ve caught something impressive. According to the readings, when patched-up and tuned properly it will top five hundred – faster even than the Crystal Chaser in all her new-born glory before she ran into some of the worst luck in the Galaxy. A tiny cargo-bay, and only S-class cargo; so no jumpdrive – but a built-in Triplex scanner will be invaluable. My jaw dropped a little. She can mount four alpha-PACs? Fast, agile, dangerous, and able to see a long way. I can forgive a small hold for all that. I think First Steps might just be heading for a quick sale, once I can patch up the holes I've put in this new girl. Have to think about a name for her, too. I drift away a little, and ask the wounded ship to dock at the XL SPP while I work out what to do with her – she wouldn’t survive an encounter with a spacefly right now, so I need to buy at least one more shield.

Docking at the SPP myself seemed like a smart move. I felt drained all of a sudden. The whole fight had only taken about 20 mizuras from leaving the SPP to being back here and ready to dock again – but I’ve done thirty-stazura trade jaunts that left me feeling fresher. Though that might be something to do with the taint on my soul that I didn’t have a stazura ago. It will never wash out, no matter what I do.

Another stazura later, I’ve accessed the Harrier’s computer and formally transferred control. ASA have registered the change, and I’m in the "Rocks" bar on the SPP. Next door is another, called "The Hard Place". Outside are a couple of Paranid taking holos of each other standing under the two signs, apparently it's significant in Paranid culture- and hilarious, apparently. Certainly there's a lot of laughter from them. Not surprisingly with names like that in Ore Belt, it’s a pair of Miner’s bars but not actually being on a mine they're not as... um... insular as some I’ve visited. Nobody gave me a second glance, which was good. I ordered a Spacefuel and took it away to a quiet corner. Of course, ‘quiet’ is a relative term in here. So is ‘corner’, circles play a large part in the design of the place. It might not be a full-on miner’s bar but the music’s oppressively loud. I’m just glad nobody’s here in this booth but me. The chipped, scarred and stained recycled solar panel that formed the table looked nothing like Loli Pa’s place, but the floor did – the metal grating with a thin film of water running continuously over the tray below it reminded me of the gentle rude awakening I'd had in Herron's Nebula. The design had caught on quickly about fifteen jazuras ago, and it was rare to find a station bar that didn’t use it. The seating was a number of almost-circular booths each with green-padded benches around a large-ish table maybe 1.5m across, they’d hold about five in comfort and maybe eight if you were really friendly. Only now I’ve been here for ten mizuras do I realise it’s laid out to look like the station from above, the booths representing the huge collector petals- hence the solar panels for tables. The gap in the booth looked in at the bar, a circular affair right in the middle of the place. It had stools, but nobody used them except in emergencies – or perhaps if it was busy and you couldn’t get a drink, they were somewhere to sit while you waited. Sitting on one of those kinda marked you out as wanting to be centre of attention – mostly youngsters in for the first time who knew no better, or companions of negotiable affection, to be straight about it.

Why was I drinking spacefuel? Before... well, just before, I’d only really had Delaxian beers rather than whiskeys – and even then I usually shared bottles with Cora. But now it was almost automatic, I’d get to a bar and order whatever fuel they had to offer. That was a bit troubling, actually. But, since I’d got this one it seems a shame to waste it...

Unbidden, I’m crying into my drink. Not the huge sobs that crippled me in the sleep-cell on the Distillery, just hot, silent tears rolling down my face and into the whiskey. I don’t even know why. Well, of course I know why, I just don’t know why now.

My mind wandered, but it's a bit lost right now and shouldn't really be out on its own.

“Welcome to the Antigone Memorial Centre. How can I help you, Mr...”

“Danna. Scott Danna. I’m looking for- well, I don’t know really. Thing is, I’ve just arrived in sector for the first time, and I promised myself that if I ever came here I’d visit the Memorial. So here I am, at the Antigone Memorial. Only, I haven’t a clue where to start.” I was struggling for words, a bit. I was tired of course, any trip through The Hole does that to me, I hate not being able to see. The concentration drains you, as your eyes try to search out anything in the thick fog. And the Antigone Memorial Centre is an imposing place with a very emotive history behind it. But it was also due to being short of breath after the librarian had stood up from rooting around behind the Centre’s reception desk and spoken to me. She was almost my height, which is no mean feat in itself – I’m not that much above average height for an Argon male, but above it I am – and so was the librarian, which is well above average for an Argon female. The short crop of blonde hair didn’t really suit her, but the sharp blue-grey eyes behind the spectacles – whatever breath I had left, they stole it.

“Well, there’s a walking tour, Mr. Danna – it begins just over there, and at each of the stations is a holovid guide who will explain the exhibits and documents nearby. That would be a good way to start, it charts the history of the Xenon conflict, and the events that occurred here. Most people take around two stazuras to complete the tour, so if you’re short of time then that might not be the best approach.”

“I have plenty of time, Ms...”

She reddened, slightly. I guess most visitors didn’t ask that question. “Farli. Cora Farli. Enjoy your tour, and if you need anything just press the ‘help’ button on one of the stations. One of our staff will be along to answer any additional questions you might have.” Ms. Farli turned and vanished back behind the front desk, looking for whatever it was she hadn’t found when I arrived.

“The Xenon force numbered in the hundreds of ships, a mixture of fighters and at least three K-class Destroyers. Despite the evacuation effort, the unarmed station was still at least half-populated when that force arrived. These are the last images of the Antigone, taken by an Argon pilot just sezuras before the station was destroyed. Only twenty-four souls survived, of the estimated thirty thousand who remained aboard the station. Testimonies and interviews with the survivors are on the walls around this terminal. Some Argon pilots reported seeing space-suits among the wreckage disappear before their eyes without the Xenon ships firing, but no recording was made and no other proof of this is known to exist. After the destruction of the station, the Xenon fleet turned and left, causing no further damage to other stations in the sector. The reasoning behind this remains a mystery.”
The carefully chosen music that accompanied the narration had begun with hope as the tour started, brave Argon fighters taking on the unstoppable Xenon fleet, and the massive mobilisation of ships to evacuate the Antigone station being described over subtle but stirring tunes. They had turned mournful though, as the story had unfolded around the main hall of the Centre. A family had started the tour about twenty mizuras behind me, and I noticed as we went around that each piece of music was a variation on the last – a sort of Teladi Whisper of song, changing with each new iteration. But they all still fit together! An older couple were just beginning the tour as mine finished – and I suddenly heard both the first and last sections together, merging perfectly. It was a masterpiece, and probably completely unnoticed by most. I’d only picked up on it by chance, and I wondered if the music was available. I went back to the front desk.

“Um.. Hello again, Ms. Farli. I wonder – are there any recordings available of the music used in the tour narration?”

The librarian’s smile was warm and welcoming. It certainly warmed me, at least. “Yes, normally we would have some in the gift shop, but we sold our last copies just a couple of tazuras ago. It’s a very popular item! Our supplier was supposed to bring us new stock last wozura but we’re still waiting. I could let you know when we get that shipment, if you like?”

“Could you? That’d be stellar. You’ll need some contact details of course. I’m a trader, so I’m afraid it’s my wave address rather than a planetside code.” I punched the numbers into a data pad for her. “Would you like to take payment now, to reserve a copy?”

“Thank you, yes. Every credit helps support the foundation. If you could enter a credit reference on here, the price is shown there for you.”
I hit the relevant numbers for my credit reference and entered a payment figure, multiplying the cost by ten – it was still only fifteen credits but like the lady says – every credit helps. I handed the terminal back to her, with the ‘Transaction complete’ message showing; all she would know is that the price requested had been paid. I wasn’t trying to impress her with random acts of generosity, it’s only really charity if nobody else knows about it.



I lifted my head out of my hands, and stared into the whiskey. That had been the first time I’d met Cora, and neither of us had any idea at the time how happy – and at times how miserable – we would make each other. I had to talk to someone about how killing those pirates had made me feel, and right now I missed her so much it was almost like I’d fired the IREs into my own spacesuit. She was the smart one, I know she would have been able to rationalise it, to justify it, turn it into something positive – but she wasn’t here, and I couldn’t do it alone. I needed her, and I didn't know how much until she was gone. Even if she hadn't been able to rationalise it, she would have held me- and everything would have been OK while I was in her arms. I finished the spacefuel, and ordered another. Perhaps oblivion was the best course to set.

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Post by gsheriston » Fri, 5. Jun 09, 01:52

Best Served Cold
Part Six - Back to Work

The wave transcoder chirped insistently, and I reached over to acknowledge it
.
“Mr. Danna?”

Holy... The Librarian, what was her name? Cora, that was it. “This is Ms. Farli from the Antigone Memorial Centre. I’m waving to let you know that the recording you ordered, Antigone Requiem, is now back in stock at the Centre. Your copy has been reserved, you just need to bring your credit receipt to the Centre and one of our staff will be happy to present it to you. We look forward to your arrival.”

It didn’t really need a response, but I quickly waved back. Any excuse! “Thank you, Ms. Farli. I’m afraid I won’t be back in that sector for probably two wozuras. Is that a problem?”

“Not at all, it will be waiting for you. Good tazura.” Her smile was just as devastating now as it had been on the station.

It chirped again, louder and more strident this time. Only, it didn’t go off when I hit the acknowledge button. It got louder, and the Mercury’s cockpit started to blur around me – it resolved into a sleep cell, just like all the others. It wasn’t a wave, it was an alarm clock. I hit it, and this time it did go quiet. I still felt empty, the dream of Cora hadn’t helped. And if I just kept my mind away from it, I could almost forget the awful things I did just eighteen stazuras before. They were done, though, and wallowing in self-pity would not help. The ‘fuel had helped me sleep, and I did feel a bit more lucid. Now I had to go to work, I needed shields for First Steps, and the badly holed Harrier. Hmm. Still needed a name for her, too.

A shower, a meal, and I was back out at the docking area checking the bulletin board a stazura later. Bingo. Someone wants ONE unit of Biological micro-organisms shipping to Ringo Moon – and they’ll pay 735 for it. Another 893 if I can get it there fast – and at 52 mizuras I could probably walk it in that time. Shame I don’t have any cargo space, really... So I hop into First Steps, and do some transferring. Two e-cells to the Harrier and the Boost Extension and Ecliptic Projector go the other way. I now have 52 minutes to cross three sectors. And it’s easy. When I get to Cattle Ranch M alpha, there’s another little bonus – the 33 e-cells I have in the hold all go for 19Cr... They’re really desperate for them at the moment. If I’d been a ‘Profiteer’ rank, I could have landed a contract to supply 325 for them, at 20Cr + 5335 – but whoever’s ruined my name has also taken out all of my rankings, and I’ve just made it back to Journeyman... It’s not all bad news though. Val Joyi wants to go see Aron Gusta in Red Light – and she’ll give me 1500Cr. to get her there. That’s just one sector- I’d be foolish not to.

Val is a cheerful soul – and talkative. I’m very glad it’s only one sector. I might have been foolish after all. On the other hand, those 1500Cr. she has burning a hole in her account are very welcome to join me; so I stay silent. Well, I wouldn’t want to interrupt the lady... Her gratitude is plentiful, and she gushes on about how she didn’t think she’d be able to make it back in time, something about a surprise party – it won’t be, if she doesn’t learn how to stay quiet for more than a few sezuras!

Calon Bro couldn’t be more different. Never said a word all trip, aside from giving me 2500 Cr., going from the Federal Argon Shipyard to a Cahoona Bakery in Cloudbase South West. Feels strange being there again, too – looking out at the Goner temple. Right there, that clamp, is where my jumpdrive was fitted. A shudder ran through me, and I left in a hurry. I had to, Leann Seldon had to be in Argon Prime at the crystal fab in just under a stazura. But getting her there would net me another 2500Cr., so I wasn’t about to turn the lady away. A serious one, business-type. If I didn’t know better, I’d have said she was Government – but they tend to fly only on Government ships. Who and what she is doesn’t matter – only the credits. And it seems I’m on a roll – that same Crystal fabrication plant wants to move some Cartography chips to a cattle farm in Ringo Moon. Only trouble with this kind of frantic odd-job activity is that it’s easy to get confused – probably why I ended up at the wrong cattle farm. Not that it mattered too much, I was able to correct my mistake and still get there ahead of time – another 1000 Cr. to the war-fund.

Someone wants Susu Da dead – and they’re willing to pay 17428 for it – but I’m not really feeling up to that, and I’m still only packing four alpha-IREs. It would be like trying to get their ship to blow up by asking it nicely. I let that one go. However... this is more interesting. Some guy who won’t tell me his name wants a fast, well-armed ship (and he’s still talking to me? He must really be desperate...) to take him just across the sector. Only, there's this one catch; he’s being chased by the Xenon. Am I desperate enough to take him?

You bet.

We depart, with this nervous, anonymous young man hiding in the second seat. He’s trying very hard not to be seen, despite the fact someone would have to be standing on the wing and looking past me to spot him. There are two N-class ships suddenly making a bee-line for me. I swear, at the first opportunity, to pick up some fight-control software. Fighting without it is difficult and far more dangerous than it needs to be. However, it seems the Gods are smiling on me – or perhaps Bethany’s now got them wrapped around her finger too – nice to know it’s not just me. I’m making a lot of progress with the first of the Ns when I hear a missile warning. I have no idea where it’s coming from, so I throw the ship into a spiral and there’s pretty much a scorch mark where the missile grazed over the nose. There are other marks inside, I suspect, given the reaction of my passenger. Eeew.

“Shields critical”

My eyes popped wide open at that, I must have been a little too predictable and one of the Xenon has solved the equations to put IRE fire right down the side of the ship. Thankfully, I don’t actually lose any more hull and am able to turn on the nearest fighter. By now it’s been hurt badly and is much slower. It doesn’t take long to finish it off and start on its compatriot. With no support, it falls relatively quickly – I’m getting better at leading the target, and learning surprisingly fast. Maybe this combat business isn’t so difficult after all? And since the skies are now clear of red blips, I point the nose at the Cahoona Bakery and make haste to get this passenger out of my ship. Mostly so I can clean it. And after all that, I’m ‘presented’ with a measly 425 credits? Next time, he can float over in a space-suit. However, killing off Xenon in Argon space is good for my reputation. I’m now a ‘Confirmed Friend’, but I bet nobody sends me a birthday card. And now I’m apparently a ‘novice’ at combat again. Probably about 15 jazuras after the first time, but then it had taken 5 jazuras to get there.

But, since I’ve now got over 10,000Cr., I have a job to do. I set the autopilot for Argon Prime’s equipment dock – it’s time to pick up that second shield and get the Harrier back to the Shipyard for repairs. On arrival it looks like I could buy a bit more stuff now, but not the important one – Fight Mk. 2 is beyond my reach still. However, a little under 5200Cr nets me that second shield. A swift jaunt back to the SPP in Ore Belt, transfer one shield across and send the Harrier on its way to the shipyard. I follow in First Steps, though it feels like I could have kept up just using the suit thrusters. On our arrival at the Shipyard it’s clear that there’s a small number of viable options – keep making money out of the Disco until I have enough to repair the (still anonymous) Holey Harrier or transfer all the equipment across and sell First Steps – using the proceeds to make repairs and do any other kitting out. It’s not a difficult choice. By the time I’ve completed the transaction and visited the Equipment dock, I’ve got a fully-tuned and non-holey Harrier – and 2852 credits to my name. It doesn’t turn brilliantly yet, but I was running out of money fast. Now what? It's starting to look like I've been too efficient, everyone is happy where they are again.

Quantum Tube Fab wants 2000+ energy cells... Great opportunity, and I could even take it up – but with a ship capable of holding about 20 at a time I don’t think it’s a viable option. I could make a few credits here, though... back to Ore Belt. Only, I don’t get to come back because someone wants a one-way trip to Elena’s Fortune. I can’t help thinking that lots of people get one-way trips there, but most don’t actually go looking for them. It’s a rough sector, but I’ve got a fast ship. So, the lure of doubling my cash reserve proves too much. When we get there and my passenger hands over his 2500 Cr., I start looking around. Lots of red on the sector map, but too much of it is M3 class. While toying with the idea of starting something, I make the wonderful discovery that the ship has Fight software Mk1 and Mk 2 built in! But with 4 alpha IREs, it’s still 'no contest' with most things in sector. Time to run, and wow does this girl run. On a whim, I’ve fetched up in the Equipment Dock in Cloudbase South East – and they have beta IREs... I pick up three but can’t afford the fourth even though I’ve sold all the alphas.

It's been a busy tazura, I've kept myself occupied and it seems to be keeping me on an even keel. I'm feeling as good as I have at any time since Brennan's Triumph without the aid of 'fuel. So, I’m going to take a huge risk. I’m going home. Back to Antigone Memorial, for the first time since Cora and the kids were killed. There’s nothing there that’s ours, of course – we’d sold everything in preparation for moving to the station- but it’s still where we’d made our home, where Cora and I had met, where our children were born. It will be hard, but one day I’ll be forced to go back there for one reason or another – perhaps I should get it out of the way now when there is no outside pressure. Gods know how I’m going to feel when I arrive.

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Post by Captain Chris sTc » Fri, 5. Jun 09, 19:50

Great story there about his trying to get to grips with his feelings of loss and guilt. All intermingled with story about the game play.

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Post by gsheriston » Sat, 6. Jun 09, 02:56

Captain Chris sTc wrote:Great story there about his trying to get to grips with his feelings of loss and guilt. All intermingled with story about the game play.
Thank you :) Glad you're still here reading and enjoying!

Best Served Cold
Part Seven - Homeward Bound

I’m here. Antigone Station’s remnants still float in orbit around the huge beige-coloured planet, but kept in a very tight cordon and well away from the sector traffic. One does not go visiting, we respect the dead and leave them to rest in peace here. Sightseers are discouraged, often with some force if they’re persistent enough.

I didn’t really know what to expect when I arrived. Whether it would be crushing despair, anger, sadness, an uncontrollable upwelling of memories and emotions... I guess the last thing I expected to feel was this- nothing. After all, we had all met here in one way or another – Cora and I at the Memorial Centre, then ‘meeting’ the kids in BalaShandra Hospital over the course of seventeen jazuras- we’d grown together, lived, loved and learned in this system, on the planet now hanging above me. I would not go down to the surface, that might be too much of a risk. For now, I’m OK. Mostly. There’s the ever-present dull ache knowing that I’ll never see any of them again, and the short-fuse anger against their murderers, but for now, I’m OK.

No, I’m not. Not now. Those three red blips shouldn’t be here. This place should be a pristine memorial to my family too, not just those who died on the station in the Xenon conflict. Harriers, three of them – all listed as ‘pirate’. I can outrun any of them. I have real fight software, I’ve upgraded from gift-wrap to cooking foil shields, and acquired more powerful weapons. And now they’re here, where I really, really don’t want them to be. Without any conscious decision, I’m already closing on them, the three ships flitting aimlessly with no clue of what furious wrath is about to arrive. The first cannot get out of her ship fast enough, I’ve stripped her shields to nothing and eaten large chunks out of her hull before she realises what direction the threat is coming from. She’s no danger now, ignore her. Two more have now realised something’s wrong and are starting attack patterns. The second explodes, scattering debris which impacts on an asteroid mid-sector; a glittering light-show on its surface will mark the Pirate’s final resting place, for a few sezuras. The third Harrier, a Vanguard, is being a little more wary – staying out of range as best it can. But as it lines up for an attack run, I turn to face it then strafe away, pitching the nose slightly. Its fire curls harmlessly beneath my wing, but the Vanguard runs straight into my IRE fire and its shields collapse before bits of hull go missing. There’s a brief communication from the grizzled old pilot, something about leaving his ship. I didn’t hear it fully, but I got the message. Two astronauts, floating in space. Two ships that are no longer in Pirate hands. If I let them go, they’ll be back to cause trouble later; I know they will. But I can’t do it again. I even pull up behind the older man and zero in on him with the IREs- but I can’t pull the trigger.

Part of me thinks this is a good thing. Another part thinks that this hesitation will get me killed one tazura. But it’s easier to live with myself, I know that much. Maybe this will give them enough of a fright to get out of the business? I doubt it, but they have the chance now- though I’ve waved the Argon authorities, hopefully they’ll be picked up soon and face trial. Still leaves two unclaimed ships though... I collected both and fired them off shieldless toward Argon Prime. Another fight, another kill, and two more ships. What have I become? I aim for the Trading station, and head straight for the bar. This time, I’m making a conscious decision to have a beer. Things are going to have to change. I can’t go on drinking the hard stuff at the rate I have been, it’s just a matter of time then before wanting a drink becomes needing a drink and that just is not acceptable. In fact, I might just try and have a Stott cocktail of some kind. Booze has its uses and the Gods know I’ve taken advantage of all of them in one way or another. But if I’m not careful it’ll become a habit, and one that could also leave me potentially flying under the influence – if I’m caught they’ll take my flight status away and I might even face a custodial sentence if anyone is hurt. Can’t kill that Pirate Base if I can’t fly, can I? Because I want to be the one pulling the trigger. I don’t want to be giving orders and watching from a safe distance, I want to feel each bolt leave my ship and leave marks on that base. It’s not ‘just business’ as so many of these things are; this is personal.

The Trading Station bar is a cosmopolitan enough place – there are Split and Boron, Argon and Paranid, and a whole lot of Teladi trying to sell things table-to-table. Some things never change, though I’m a bit surprised to see the Split and Boron parties actually mixing rather than eyeing each other up from across the whole room with unpleasantness in mind. What was it now? “Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer” – maybe that has something to do with it. I’m sitting in a booth on my own with my ‘Ocean Breeze’, a Boron concoction with a fresh, tangy odour and a deep blue-grey-green colour. It’s surprisingly good, actually. Wish I knew what was in it, but it’s really difficult to keep track of the Boron bartenders. All those flippers, you see. Across the table, an Argon man puts his drink down and slides into the booth. He’s older than me, but younger than Ban Danna – though he does look a bit like him, even if he doesn’t have the same military demeanour. I’ve never seen him before, though. His voice is gruff, it sounds like he’s actually sucked vacuum before.

“Seen your face here from time-to-time – not for a while now, though.”

“Really? I have to be honest with you; I don’t recall seeing yours. I don’t owe you money, do I?” The smile I flashed with it seems to work, he’s not offended by my words. It was a risk, but then so was breathing- it has a 100% mortality rate, if you wait long enough.

“No, nothing like that. But usually there’s that tall blonde woman with you... not here tonight?”

My eyes must have been screaming at him when I looked up. “She was killed, a little short of three wozuras ago – along with the rest of our family. Pirates took down the Mammoth they were on, while I was away picking up a jumper for it. Captain thought he’d get a head start and risk Hatikvah’s through to Elena’s Fortune. If he’d waited another stazura, he’d have had his jumpdrive, I’d be working my own station with my family, and you’d probably never have seen me again. But why the interest? If you don’t mind me asking, who are you?”

“Sorry to hear that. I’m nobody, really – I own the bar. Name’s Erik Sander. My family was on the Antigone Station when it was destroyed. Someone put my Dad aboard one of the first shuttles to leave, because he was only about nine jazuras old at that time - none of the rest of his family made it off. Your... wife? Partner? She was helping me trace some things that had belonged to them. 'Bout a mazura ago I was having to talk to someone else and start all over again. Just trying to find out what happened, is all. Sorry to have disturbed you and brought it all up again. You’ll not pay for another drink tonight, by way of an apology and my thanks for her help. She was a good researcher, very thorough. Never gave up trying to find my family’s things. I’ll leave you be, ‘till you want another drink.”

He was right, too – I couldn’t buy another drink all night. Not that I wanted too many, the Ocean Breeze was really nice to drink but after another two and an Atreus’ Sunset, I didn’t think I could face anything else. It was a little strange, walking to the sleep-cell I’d booked rather than staggering there.

Waking up the following tazura was a different story. Whatever spices there were in those drinks, they really didn’t agree with my digestive system. I almost ended up having to take the cell for another tazura because it was like having food poisoning and I didn’t dare leave the bathroom. I should have maxed-out on the Spacefuel, I’d have felt better when I woke up... At least I could patch through to the ship and check on those other two Harriers I’d sent to Argon Prime – both had arrived, intact. I needed to get over there and sell them on. Thankfully whatever it was that had irritated my system wasn’t in it any more. I felt like there was nothing in my system at all, to be brutal about it. Making my way back to the (still anonymous) Harrier, I checked the Bulletin Board. Everyone is still happy being right where they are. Doesn’t anyone want a ride? Oh- another bulletin from Pandora, she’s found something odd floating in Emperor’s Ridge. Wasn’t she supposed to be checking Cardinal’s Domain? Told you she was fast. Bet she’s still ugly, though. Maybe one day I’ll go and see what it is she’s run into. By then I guess I’ll be in a queue to buy stuff from the ‘Pandora’s Box gift store’, though, surrounded by all the other tourists.

Leaving Antigone Memorial behind again was easier than I’d expected. A wave from the local Authorities informed me that they had apprehended a known criminal based on my information, and that they were grateful. I noticed they were not grateful enough to pay me. I also noticed that they only mentioned one... So what happened to the one that got away? Which one was it? The grizzled old spacer, wily with years of experience? Or was it the young, brash girl probably not much older than Beth? I guess it doesn’t matter. Whichever it was, it will be a little while before they get hold of another ship and go back to piracy. I stopped off at Power Circle, and the giant XL power plant. We’d have been in competition with this monster, if we’d set up the station. But with Kingdom End to the North, and Cloudbase North West to our south there was enough of a market for us. It’s still less than 30 e-cells, but one thing I learned as a trader was never to fly empty. Besides, I knew of somewhere that always needed energy...

“Scott Danna, I told you that you were not welcome here!” Loli Pa was not pleased to see me.

“Have I ordered a drink? Actually, I came by to say ‘thank you’. For serving me when you probably shouldn’t have, and for making sure I always got back to the sleep cell safely. I could have been another Hari Gul, if not for you. And also to show you that I can be sober, I guess.”

“This pleases me, Scott Danna. I apologise for your welcome. Would you like a drink? We do have a fine range of Boron cocktails... Please do not ask for spacefuel or anything similar.”

Whenever I come here, my stomach thinks it’s a stunt-ship. Right now it’s pulling what feels like the corkscrew move I used on that last Harrier. Maybe it’s telling me to stay away?

“Uh... How about a Kharve? I’ve just recently had a bad experience with an over-abundance of Ocean Breeze and Atreus’ Sunset. I like them, but they don’t like me.”

“Please, find a seat. I will bring you your Kharve.”. Soon there was a cacophony of noise from behind the bar, gases under pressure in hot liquids, and a rich, deep aroma as Loli Pa arrived with the steaming pot and mug.

“You were badly served, Scott Danna. Boron cocktails are carefully mixed, because some of the spices react with each other. Over the hundreds of jazuras, Boron have learned which should not be mixed. No bartender here would have served you an Atreus’ Sunset after the Ocean Breeze. Rolk’s Rapid River may have been a wiser choice, and has a similar taste. Were you asked what you had taken before, when you ordered the Sunset?”

“Not that I recall.”

“Then the Bartender should be removed from their post. Had you ordered a Menelaus’ Marshwater, you could have been hospitalised or killed. Please, do not avoid Boron cocktails because of this one bad experience from a poorly-trained or careless Bartender. However, for now, enjoy your Kharve.”

I did, it was an excellent pot. Clearly there was more to his line of work than just lining up spacefuel and looking after drunks, and maybe the calming voice wasn't the only reason most bartenders were Boron... I paid my tab, offered my thanks, and left for Argon Prime. Though, for some reason the autopilot decided to bounce me off the station on the way out. Better get that checked, and soon. The autopilot had a bizarre habit of flying through the position lights then correcting its position, like it wasn’t quite good enough to land it right on the money... Thankfully the shield-to-shield contact wasn’t seen as hostile and didn’t cost me any hull. Argon Prime Shipyard couldn’t find anything wrong, though.

The pilots who’d bailed out of those two Harriers had done a good job of making sure I had nothing but the hull to play with. Not one scrap of equipment remained on either ship. One of them even had laser burns where the pilot had shot out a couple of panels as they evacuated! But, between them they got me 35k; so no complaints from me. At a loose end again, and with nobody needing me to take them (or anything else) anywhere, I decided to take my cash and try for that fourth beta-IRE. I only got to Ore Belt, though, because I found two Busters shooting up the SPP. One of them looked particularly careless, as it had a full shield charge but was missing fully half of its hull. Here were people doing bad things. Definitely Pirate activity. But – M4s, could this pocket rocket do anything about them?
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Post by Ed Man » Sun, 7. Jun 09, 01:00

just want to say I liked it! :D

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Post by The Zig » Sun, 7. Jun 09, 15:31

Read this last night, and great stuff. It's got a really nice implied depth - things like the Boron cocktail and stuff - and it's kept its reflective tone with his musing on that kill, and on his personal history. Cool.

Glad you enjoyed Terraformer Dreams, and thanks for the kind words. It did take a while to write, but got there in the end! First House is punchier and a bit more plot driven, but it was fun to write.

Looking forward to the next part. Personally, M4s are my favourite kills early on, too slow to run away, and too weak to withstand a heavy surprise attack. But two can be problematic.... Silkworm missiles!! Grrr! :evil:

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Post by gsheriston » Sun, 7. Jun 09, 19:48

Best Served Cold
Part Eight - Voice from the Past

That went better than expected… Both M4s were concentrating on trying to find a thermal exhaust port or something on the SPP – they were never going to even dent the shields on a station with a pair of Busters but they kept shooting just the same. But I think they were looking for a weak spot, because they didn’t pay me any attention whatsoever. Bad move, on their part. Neither one of them so much as turned to face me, and now they’re both gone. And apparently I’m now listed as ‘competent’ again. It won’t be long before my combat rating is back where it had been. What had taken me twenty jazuras before was now going to be done in just a couple of wozuras. I used to run away a lot, but I also stuck to safe sectors. Made sense to me, I had a slow ship and a rear turret. Can’t fight and fly at the same time, and I had responsibilities. I don’t have those restrictions any more, though I’d gladly trade all the freedom in the galaxy to have my responsibilities back. At least my stomach had stopped churning now when I thought about my family. Of course it still hurts, but now it makes me sad and angry, rather than plain sick. Maybe the Boron Spice incident has just left my system unable to feel much for a little while.

Back to the original ‘mission’ – that fourth beta IRE. Naturally, when I get to the Equipment Dock, it’s empty of said weaponry. So, a longer haul up to Rolk’s Fate where I know there’s a Boron Dock. They might have some… and I’m going to run North from Elena’s Fortune to get there. Because I can, no other reason.

I have to get this autopilot looked at in some detail. It tried to take me through about four different asteroids just in Farnham’s Legend! But, with a few manual interventions, I make it safely through the risky area into Boron territory. The Dock has the IREs, but… the Boron seem to think mine are ‘the wrong hands’ that they don’t want such dangerous weaponry falling into. Considering they’d previously thought of me as equivalent to the Queen’s Guard, this hurts a bit. Especially since they also have the alpha PACs that this ship will carry, if I can ever scrape enough credit together. I have to get them to like me, and that means doing things for people and rebuilding my reputation. Who wants to go places?

Nobody, of course. Well, if that’s the way the Galaxy wants to play, I’ll go along for the ride. North again, into Menelaus’ Frontier, where I’m immediately picking up a very faint but broad-spectrum distress beacon. In space, everyone can hear you scream. It’s very, very faint. And it keeps cutting out, too. Trouble with these broad spectrum noises is that they seem to come from everywhere – everyone knows there’s somebody in trouble, but you can’t tell where they are. Usually they’re coupled with a location beacon on a specific emergency frequency, the idea is that the ‘shout’ gets everyone’s attention, people switch to the emergency frequency, pick up the locator and help arrives pretty fast. It’s a good system, it works. When a boost extension blew up on me out in Akeela’s Beacon a few jazuras ago, I had to trigger my own. I had contact from Argon rescue in twenty sezuras, and a rescue tug in another thirty mizuras. You don’t need me to tell you how big that sector is, and the explosion had bent a thruster out of position – which in turn burned straight through the control lines. I was heading away from the ecliptic and off into the wilds of nowhere with no way to control the engines which were on full power, loose, and pointing in varying directions... It would have taken wozuras to find me with a standard search, and only then after the standard two stazuras beyond my predicted arrival time.

Did you know that every time you set your autopilot for a station, it also sets a clock running? The ‘docking granted’ message you get is also confirmation that your ETA has been logged. Your ship gives its location and speed capabilities, and the central traffic computer on the destination station works out when you’re likely to arrive. Two stazuras after that, unless it’s received the ‘autopilot off’ message or ‘change of destination’ message, it launches search & rescue ships along your projected route. That’s why I usually use autopilot between stations, it’s additional security.

But – this faint signal I could hear didn’t appear to be linked to a locator signal. I tried the emergency frequency but got nothing. So, with no way of finding whoever it was, I did what everyone else had done; ignored it. I just kept drifting North while I decided on a target station. Next time, I’ll make sure I pick one –any one- as soon as I’m in sector. Because, coming face-to-face with several billion units of ore or silicon still in one big lump can be hazardous to health, self esteem and your ship’s capabilities. While I frantically dodged the asteroid bearing down on me, I realised there was another ship in the vicinity. It wasn’t moving, and the computer identified it as a Toucan Hauler. I got the ship under control, and headed off to investigate. And there it was, just sitting there abandoned. I’ll bet a nividium asteroid to a credit that’s the source of the emergency shout. I drift lazily around it, try a couple of communication frequencies, nothing. It seems unpowered, but the shields are reading maximum and the hull looks undamaged. It’s a bit creepy, to be honest. But, if there’s an emergency beacon on it I should investigate – if only so I can shut the thing down. I prep for EVA and pop the hatch on the Harrier. The closer I get, the more it looks pristine, save for a few micrometeorite scorches but you get those on any moving ship- unless it was built here, they’re a given. I’m not familiar with the design so it takes a couple of mizuras to find and access the main hatch – but it’s a Personnel Transporter, so there has to be a way in to the main cabin. There you are. The emergency access hasn’t been used yet, but I start winding the handle and the door opens fairly smoothly. Once inside the airlock I repeat the procedure and get inside.

It’s dark, and with the power off I’m relying on the suit’s lights to find my way around but after a few false starts I manage to reach the cockpit. The access keys are still in place, but the entire ship is in ‘standby’ mode. Thankfully, while it’s a Teladi design it’s been built for an Argon customer – so I can read the instruments and controls. Don’t get me wrong, I know enough Teladi script to fly freighters and maybe a few fighters, but something like this? I’ve never flown any TP-class, so I have no idea about things like the life-support systems in the passenger cabin for example. There, by the pilot’s chair is the emergency beacon controller, blinking in the darkness- its power reserves almost gone, which explains a lot. They're supposed to be capable of running for tazuras though, so why has nobody investigated? Just because they couldn't find the locator? I reach over and switch it off. Switching the ship to ‘active’ mode, I start to feel things whirring and clicking beneath my feet, and the internal air pressure starts to go up- then I can start to hear things, too. Amazing – just a couple of mizuras and I’m able to take the helmet off, though I guess it’s only the cockpit that’s pressurised at the moment and it’s still leaving me a little short of breath but the pressure is increasing all the time. The ship even smells new. There’s definitely something odd going on here. There’s another blinking light over by the ‘cabin information system’ section, so I pull the pilot’s seat back and sit in it. I have to pull it quite a way, whoever flew the ship here wasn’t too tall.

The light is on the ‘Ship’s Log’ recording/retrieval system. Maybe there are answers here after all. But – not many. There’s only one entry, made by Sarma Koshi and dated a couple of wozuras ago, so I play it. The face on-screen is dainty, petite – short, dark red hair surrounding a sharp pair of blue eyes. The woman is pretty, but no supermodel. But, she looks beaten. Not physically, just mentally, emotionally. I knew the look, I saw it in my own mirror back on the Trading Station in Herron’s Nebula before I left to trade in Too Late. The eyes were sharp – but empty, dull and lifeless. Just like her voice.

“Look, whoever you are – you’ve just found a derelict ship floating in space. It’s empty, and it’s yours; take it with my best wishes. I hope she brings you better luck than she brought us. Me. Don’t come looking for me, I’ll be long-gone by the time you hear this. My air will run out about two stazuras after I leave, and the ship’s pre-programmed to leave me where I am and go hide somewhere. It’ll only start broadcasting three stazuras after it gets to where I’ve sent it – so it’s already too late. She was supposed to be our grand venture, my husband and I would be tour pilots – we’d given up everything to buy her and fly her. I didn’t know Jak had taken out loans, too. Lots of them, and from bad people. Well, they caught us. They shot Jak in front of me. And I’m not going to live with what they did to me afterwards, either. I tried, Gods know I tried. But it’s been a mazura now, and I’m still not sleeping. I can’t take any more.” The lady on-screen broke down finally – she’d only barely been holding herself together till now. I owed it to her to see all of the message, so I kept watching. After a mizura or so, she seemed to recover a bit. She dried her eyes and her muffled sobs died away, but her eyes were red and her voice shaky- whether it was fury, determination or sadness, I would never know. She spoke again.

“I have one request, before I go. If you ever meet a one-eyed Argon loan-shark, look in his good right eye, and tell him the woman that took his left wants him to know who sent you. Tell him that I know why he has to force himself on women, it’s because nobody would ever get so desperate that they would have him willingly. Then kill him. Make it bloody, messy, painful and above all, make it take a long time. At least two stazuras, knowing he’s going to die, and be in pain all that time. If you can’t do it yourself, hire someone. Show them this message, it might give them motivation.” A computer chimed in the background, a standard ‘command complete’ noise. “Oh. Time’s up, the computer’s ready to go. So am I. We always loved space, Jak and I – so I want to die out here, where it’s pretty. Away from all the horrors of people and what they do to each other. Just float away into nothing, watching the stars rise over a cloud-wrapped planet...” She cried again, tears leaving tracks down her face. It was hard to keep watching, but... She was another tortured soul. I couldn’t help her directly, but I could at least listen to what I guessed she intended to be her last words. It wasn’t much, but it was all I could do; unless I found this loan-shark, of course. I might be able to do something then.

“Take the ship. May she bring you prosperity, and the fortune that could have been ours. I have to go, I can’t face another night.” The recording ended, her face frozen before me. I’d been to places as dark as she had, and I understood her decision. She’d made quite sure that whoever saw the log couldn’t rescue her, so I wasn’t about to try. Besides, the log was two wozuras old. I just hope she found peace, in those last two stazuras. I wasn’t in the least surprised to find tears on my own cheeks. I said a silent prayer for Sarma, and for Jak. Then I locked the log entry so it wouldn’t be accidentally removed, made a back-up copy in the ship’s main retrieval system, and transferred control of the ship. As soon as I can, I’ll have her renamed as ‘Sarma’s Peace’.

Getting back into the Harrier, I feel drained again. I’m not sure whether it’s through listening to the broken woman’s last words, or the realisation that there are other people suffering out there just like I am in here – and suffering in many different ways. I set the Toucan going, heading for the Trading Station, and set my own course for the same place. I’ll get there first, by a long way. I put my hands to my face and rub my eyes, the Harrier blasting me across the sector. By the time I realise what’s happening, I’m on the Trading Station, staring down at an almost-empty spacefuel with two of its fallen cousins beside it.

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Post by Trigger1112 » Sun, 7. Jun 09, 21:34

Amazing! One of the best stories i've read on this forum.
(Have yet to read Terraformer Dreams)

Almost too sad to read.Almost.

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